|Reviews for Moons and Stars|
| Yuri Hannah chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
wow. cheesy and fluffy. In a good way of course.
| Aquamarine Cherry Blossom-chan chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
THIS IS SO CUTEEEE :3
pardon the caps, sorry about that.
i just manage to stumble upon this fic and woah it's so cute. i love it :)
| lisaOpine chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
Seriously WHO D HELL IS THIS YANO GUY?0_o n by d way its awesome as always haha lov ya hopes 2 read more fics likes this *i knw i am being too greedy hehe :D *
| Unknownred chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
THAT was so cute! and hilarious! i think i woke up the whole neighborhood with disheartening laughter of coughs (recovering from the flu) but thanks, that was a great story. :D love the shoe flirt btw
| The Burnt Jewel chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Good story :) I smiled a lot. Because, it was...corny :) Like Sakura said.
Anyways, it was sweet, showing Natsume's love and all, and the lines were well-versed, so, good job :)
Good luck with the next stories and keep writing :)
| ejo chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
Awwwwww, why it's cute. Hahaha.
I think it would be better if you added more details and depth to the story. Anna and Nonoko's character is a bit off, but oh well, who cares. XD
| Wisteria.Sinensis chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
Cheesy! HAHAHA. (As if I aren't. XD)
Anyway, enjoyable, I must say.
Although Nonoko and Anna was in wrong when they've ignored Mikan.
| anxo da noite chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
that was so corny but so cute- natsume's such a cheese-ballXD
| Babylion Sakura chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
| laixkiria chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
la historia es buena pero en vez del beso en la frente mejor en los labios y natsube celoso y cursi me encanta.
| ichigoaini chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Cute and sweet, but mushy. I have to agree with Annyxoxo. You might consider giving your readers a heads-up first if you're planning on OOC characters. Or that's just me. XD
Anyway, keep up the good work! :D
| GAKUENALICEROCKS chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
| Annyxoxo chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Cute idea and all, but i want to give you some advice. I am not trying to be mean AT ALL. But, humans aren't that mushy...And definitly not Natsume Hyuuga. I do think Natsume could possibly say that frase though it would take some massive planning so that it fits his personality. Characters are going to become OOC because we all have different writting styles than Gakuen Alice's original authoress. The key is reigning that in.
| namixD chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
argghhhh! my laptop isn't working well.. .
anyway, it's so sweet !
it kinda remind me of JUN PYO AND JAN DI.. the necklace JUN PYO gave to her.. the one with a moon and star inside it.. (a korean series Boys Over Flowers, in case u don't know what i'm talking about..) :DD
| sEcretmiNdLoLITA chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
ahhh so sweet! 3!