Reviews for The Fall of Lucifer
Lucifer chapter 2 . 2/5/2014
Hi, i like your story. Keep it going.
Sabre chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
I have been thinking a lot about this currently. Our instilled negative views of Satan..whatever we believe Lucifer to have become. I enjoyed reading this very much so. I was also thinking what if not only were the human race losing faith, but corrupt as well..when God found this out (that they truly were corrupt) he wanted a scapegoat (Lucifer) to take the blame for being all evil and whatnot. should email me sometime, I would like to chat and collaborate about this!
wow chapter 2 . 12/12/2013
awkward because lucifer and satan are the same thing.
william b chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
This is the average god of the bible. Nothing more than a destroyer, a savage, a being of pure evil, no wonder the devil rebelled. Gods cruelty is why i am an atheist
inquiete chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
Man this was good, thanks for expanding on this. The grammar needed to be touched up a bit but this was really good. :)
inquiete chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Nice, I love different versions of the Fall of Lucifer. Thank you so much for this if you could be so kind as to expand on this I would give you a virtual cookie and a hug. :D
Dusty.Storm chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
The bible made it pretty clear that Satan was arrogant, and thought he was better than god, which is why he rebelled with the support of some other angels. Other than that, I though the dialogue was a bit bland and lifeless. I like the idea though.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2011

but other than that it was a good story
The Silver Countess chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
I gotta say, its an interesting point of view on the fall of Lucifer. Though your grammar could use a little fixing...