Reviews for Magic and Shine
ShoefoneWeasley chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Poor Hermione. I couldn't imagine going through what she's gone through. :( I love your writing style. I could feel Hermione's emotions through, and I could tel how deeply depressed she'd become. Beautiful job. :)
KeepCalmAndWriteSomething chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Thanks for entering! I like your use of prompt. :)

I also like your style of writing. The way you phrase your sentences makes Hermione sound like she's sunk in depression. Very suitable to this piece.

And I love your last sentence.

Thanks again! Great job! Keep it up! :D
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Positively bitter and very well written. Keep writing