Reviews for She's TOTALLY Not Obsessed
swingdancer23 chapter 1 . 9/22/2011

I love this!

So, so, so KA-YEWT!

I love your oneshots.

You must do more.
HersheyChocolates101 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Hannah chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Very cute. Great one-shot!
Princess-of-Epona chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Tee hee! This goes so quickly, but it was cute : )
Luneve chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
aw the ending was so cute!
MyaLee chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
I love it Crystal 3 Best B-Day gift ever :)

(I plan to do this tomorrow ((I will steal his jacket)))
Jagsrule5 chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Darn. Third... Oh, well! ;D

Your writing is pretty good, considering that this was your first fic. I saw ZERO MISTAKES which is an accomplishment in itself, really! Congrats! :)

The only thing that I had a problem with was the storyline... I mean, you spend the first part talking about how Hikari was SO obsessed with Luke, and then you make her tell him all of the things she doesn't like about him? I think that if you had used body language and gave a bit more description, it would make the story easier to understand.

And another thing...why would he marry someone who was insane enough to sneak into his house and steal his jacket? If that were me, I would have called the cops! XD

But, otherwise, a good fic in general. The title definitely got my attention, and I got a laugh out of it, too. Good work! :D
Naty17 chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I'm not the first reviewer! Will you still love me?

That was funny. It sounds like something I would do to Chase!
LoneTaku chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
I'm not surprised that this has no reviews yet, if other readers are like me. I like it, but I just don't know what to say.