|Reviews for Beach Surprise|
| D.J. Scales chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
This is very well written.
| cybercorpsesnake chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Well that was certainly a surprise. Good lemon.
Keep up the good work.
| neamrack chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Hey I read the whole series and thought it was great. The only objection I have is hat they all ended up living together, just thought it was kinda wierd. Look foward to reading more in the future!
| Chaos - The Eternal chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
ya know what this is its a reverse gang bang 4 girls 1 guy
| KatzeNoel chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
OMG! I LOVED IT!
| mindmaster123 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
This fanfic is so good as the others :)
| NaruHinaFanboy chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Ichigo is definitely one lucky bastard! He got to have one of the best paizuri ever. Overall great job for writing this epic lemon and for never disappointing us with any terrible fanfics that you've been writing Raptor. _
| Reishin Amara chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
god,i love all of these.
LOVED THE PREGO ONE THE BEST THOUGH! SERIOUSLY! REBUILDING THE BOUNT MANSION TOO? BRILLIANT!
| warprince2000 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Awesome story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)
| Kage Bijuu chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
All I got to say is that is very best Pazuri scene ever.
| shiwa55 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
wow lol xD
| gambler chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
great story i hope that you will make a sequel to that
| S.R chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
I would like to see a preg sex fic that takes place after this: lactation and bellies. If you do, have it show what the kids look like
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
man ichigo is a pimp.
| Toshiro Ricky chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
ow man! U realy fuc*ing ero haha! U made a story of all man fantasy! Oh this is gold! You will make me wet dream with your dirty idea hahaha! I want to be like ichigo desu~