|Reviews for Cakes, Lies and Exploding Birds|
| Miffle chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Oh wow, this story is amazing! First and foremost, I absolutely love your characterisation of GLaDOS and I agree with you that she'd be pretty likely to carry her abusiveness from her Aperture days into her life with Chell. It's great to read a story that really takes this into account and that understands that Chell can't just magically ignore all the mean stuff GLaDOS says because "that's just the way she is". Chell's human so of course she's going to suffer in an abusive relationship! In general, your story's really well written, with good flow and a nice sprinkling of adorable, making it an overall great read :D
| Emmalyn chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
This was adorable. I liked that the emotion you attributed to GLaDOS was, while more human than her Aperture form, quite realistic for the situation. She wanted to fit in with humans, so she made an effort to experience things like a human, which makes perfect sense. :) And I love her inner turmoil, too-something she might have felt while at Aperture, but discounted or ignored. But now that she actually cares about someone else, well...it was adorable how much she wanted to please Chell, and I liked that Chell was understandable and relatable with regard to all her reactions, too. Thanks for posting this, and I look forward to reading more from you! :D
| The Notorious C.O.W chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
I love this story more every time I read it and that count somewhere in the double digits now.
That is HOW MUCH I LOVE IT. And I, being a finicky reader, have to really like a story to finish it. GLaDOS's mannerisms are adorable and funny! And pretty in-character given the circumstances.
| SisterDear chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
This is lovely. It has wonderful depth and texture for a simple slice of life type story. You made the world come to life around the characters, and the characters are still themselves, finding their way through this new relationship. They're different, but believably so.
| Passerby-A chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Aww, this is so cute and somewhat fluffy, despite the mention of abuse. But why does Chell speak at the end if you portrayed her as mute for most of the story? If she can speak, why doesn't she? I don't suppose it has something to do with the emotional abuse? Is she sick? It seems unlikely that GLaDOS's confession was what cured her, because that's a little too quick.
It's always fun to see GLaDOS trying to come to terms with her emerging humanity. She likes to think of herself as superior, but her pride makes her more human than she thinks.
Anyway, good job with this one shot, it's an enjoyable read, so thank you :) Cheers!
| litlime chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Aww, that was cute :D
Did you have a specific reason in mind as to why Chell is mute when writing this? Just wondering (considering Chell can laugh) if it was due to the emotional abuse?
Anyway, this was really very nice, well done!
| 12345 chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Cute and adorable. I loved it!
| Marakin chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
I thought this story was wonderful, I would love to see anything else written in this universe. The lighthearted bits were really funny, and the more serious parts interesting as well. This has been one of my favorite outside of aperture stories from portal. Please write more!
| MissLethe chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
My fans are buzzing from cuteness overload. You wrote them perfectly, thank you for this lovely fic!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
BUT WHAT ABOUT CHELL'S ROBOT CANCER!
| ippa chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
SO ADORABLE I COULD BURST
| Liyrah chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
I haven't written a review in years, but I just want to say that I thought this was adorable and I would absolutely love it if you would write more of these two. :)
| XxSweet-NightmarexX chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Oh my lord, Rick... XD
Anyways, I thought that was very cute in spite of my stance on Chell's and GLaDOS' relationship. ((I'm more for the mother-child relationship.)) I thought given the situation, GLaDOS was well enough in character. GLaD I read it. :)
| Celeste chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Okay, yuri-fans, kill me, but I've *never* been a fan of yuri/yoai; no I'm not homophobic, but I just don't like *reading* or *watching* it... I was weary of reading this but I'm just curious like that, so I clicked the fic, and I'm GLaD I did! It's written in a really nice way where the balance of emotion is perfect. Yes, GLaDOS *was* out of character a little bit, but it was okay. Didn't affect it too much, lol. Rick was funny and suggestive... XD sooooo yeaaaahhh... I like this, it was cute. _ If "cute" was what you were going for here, lawlz. (My friend, who reads fanfiction on here too, is currently freaking out about me reading this... lawlz. I just *had* to tell her I was reading something yuri-themed didn't I? XD lawlz.) I hope my review was entertaining and that you write more Portal fanfiction! XD
| Chloe Kompton chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
This is really nice, and really cute. I love how you write GLaDOS's mostly-self-conflict.