Reviews for Night has Fallen
a random Killjoy chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
so beautiful and sad...awww
Ratt9 chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
I liked this. I see you are a new author on fanfiction, and I have a piece of advice for you.

Never space a story with all of the sentences put together in one jumbo paragraph. This usually deters people from reading it, because it tends to become difficult to follow. Hit the enter button twice every few sentences before continuing to type. ]

You're a good writer!

Ratt Kazamata
BrokenOrphan chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Very well written. I enjoyed reading it thoroughly.

The only thing I would suggest is that you break it up into small paragraphs, splitting it when appropriate such as when Topic change occurs.

That's all, but I did like it.