Reviews for Harry Potter and the Return of the Squib Son
Guest chapter 48 . 4/27
That is borderline stalking and sexual harassment...but of course the professors do nothing about it
Guest chapter 37 . 4/27
Great, Hermione is being a bitch too
Guest chapter 29 . 4/27
Ugh, Daniel is a fucking asshole...surprised Harry didn't give him a piece of his mind, considering Ginny is supposed to be his friend...
Guest chapter 25 . 4/27
Ugh no, please no Lisa. She's clearly a jealous bitch...
Guest chapter 23 . 4/27
She's still a bitch. If she can't divorce her husband for what he did to her son, she sure as hell doesn't deserve forgiveness.
Charlie0925 chapter 54 . 4/20
Loved this! Brilliant writing here honey! ;o)
Guest chapter 47 . 4/1
banded is spelt banned
apart from that its amazing
Hadrian Eveningshade chapter 26 . 3/11
Not good story,,
It a mgical world and this is a fanfic, but your story is not logical
lazy-kaa chapter 54 . 3/5
Glad that you've done it. The storry is close to origanal, but has some unique taste. Thanks for final fight with TMR.
lazy-kaa chapter 10 . 3/5
Harry is a bit too older in your storry for 11-years boy.
zeps9001 chapter 50 . 2/28
I know there is only couple of chapters left, but this has become unreadable. It was fine at the start of this story, but now they seem rushed and posted just to finish this story quicker.

I don't like what you did with Lily, she could have and should have, divorced James in Harry's first year (as all it takes is going to ministry). She ignoring Harry for years is inexcusable.

You can't have even worse Dumbledore as in canon with no bashing and pretending he's good. Harry being squib is mentioned several times and it is the title of this story, but never actually explained.

He gets extra lessons from one teacher and suddenly he's on the level with Voldemort and Dumbledore? That's stupid, if you wanted him to defeat Voldemort in the ministry at least use his super secret power of looking into souls. The secret who he needed protect, by learning Occlumancy, but could freely talk about it to Hermione.
zeps9001 chapter 23 . 2/27
Really don't like how you wrote Lily. I can understand James, he's a pureblood and disowning squib children could be normal. She ignored Harry for two years, because she was observing him? You understand how stupid this sounds?

Her husband kidnapped her son against her wishes and then obliviated her years of memories, but now she still loves him and seemingly has no problem with it and happily ignores her son daily for years.
zeps9001 chapter 12 . 2/27
So Dumbledore and James obliviated Lily of having another child. I really hope there will be consequences of this. Any other reasonable person would at least divorce after that.
Guest chapter 54 . 2/25
I really enjoyed this story. The whole Animavidecy thing was really amazing and well thought out.
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 2/8
Interesting idea and plot and chapter
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