Reviews for Harry Potter and the Return of the Squib Son
Guest chapter 7 . 8/11
Im going to cry if Snape is Harry's dad
ExRevolution chapter 28 . 7/28
That doesnt make any sense. I mean I get why itd be daniel normally but you wrote that voldemort knew it wasnt daniel but in fact harry so did voldemort not tell crouch or did crouch just mess up?
Guest chapter 35 . 7/21
ive noticed that people writing HP fanfic like to throw around the word powerful. most of the time i have no friggin idea what they mean by it, i havent seen the mc block spells with ease, i havent seen them wreck shit with fiendfyre, powerful how? its annoying, to be honest.
Guest chapter 32 . 7/21
i certainly you didnt go NTR like in unsung hero, it is one of the most disgusting things to read.
Guest chapter 30 . 7/21
why is that "I've" at the start of the chapter?
Guest chapter 25 . 7/21
in canon Peter is a snivelling coward, i guess not here
Guest chapter 24 . 7/21
silly little Harry, feelign bad over what was reasonable with the information he had, but hten again, he is but a small child.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/20
this was one of the best chamber of secrets ive read on this site
Guest chapter 21 . 7/20
i like it, the first time someone thought to use its gaze against itself that ive read, ive been trying and trying to find someone that had done it, thank you.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/20
that he can talk to snakes isnt news to Harry... he did it at the zoo, i do not believe for a second that he forgot.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/20
Snakes dont rip and tear, they are more inclined towards strangling, poisoning and devouring you whole.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/20
why would Harry doubt Lunas claims to the existence of these creatures? up until he was 11 he thought dragons and unicorns were not real, he was proven wrong.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/20
i think its shit, im however going to give this one a few more chapters to see whether im going to drop it or not.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/20
well.. im bored, but then again, the first book sucks ass, its hard to rewrite it into something good if you follow canon so closely.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/20
That ending... makes me think that maaaybe im going to stop reading this soon, there are more teachers than the stiff bitch.
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