Reviews for Jesus and the Time Machine
C. E. Kilgore Trout chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Very very cool. I haven't read much in the 2nd person, and this was fascinating. Very cool indeed.
DragonGolem chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Wow...that is an interesting metaphorical dilemma. Thanks for writing something actually thought provoking.
BarasLB chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
This was very enjoyable for me with second person pov as an added bonus.

While I can't exactly say that this is how it was implied in SH-5(I recall that it was more a person taking Christ's height and such. It has been quite a few years since I last read it so I may be off on this), it has a Vonnegut touch to it.

It might even have been how Vonnegut would have set it up if it was more like your idea; setting up a set of circumstances that crush a man beliefs.
Anon chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Stories in second person are very annoying. This is no exception.
Est. 98 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Ooohh, creative.

I liked it.
qwerqwer chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
this was very odd. what else can i say?
Serial Peacekeeper chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Interesting not religious or anything but may I ask what your intention was for the story? Also why is it just one paragraph its a little disorienting this way.