|Reviews for Hold On|
| GraceXElisabeth chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
My perfect kind of story, loved it!
| FredForever chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
(it's me i was just too lazy to log in) :). Awesome! I'm so glad you are back writing again :) keep it up ! Send me a message whenever you want my opinion on something :) :) FredForvever
| The Teal Dragon chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Amazing story, I love it! Favorited :)
| Ms.ZoeiLang chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
You should write more Jackie and Steven stories! They are the best!
| Tiffany chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
I really liked that you explored the deeper side of Jackie - one that I think most people ignore, but it's totally there in my humble opinion - and had her doing something like cutting. I can see her doing something like this, though perhaps in a spot that was easier for her to hide or something. I loved that Hyde just stopped when he saw what was going on - something Hyde would definetly do in such a case.
The only thing that bothered me a bit was Hyde's OOC-ness with some of the things he was saying at such an early stage of their relationship, but I understood that it was done so it followed the storyline of the song so it didn't bother me that much.
This was great! Keep it up. _