|Reviews for There's A Fire Starting In My Heart|
| CarmillaD chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Well, I do like this couple too, I think they had a lot of potential and together as the power antagonist couple they would've been a terrible thread, just like ChrisXBlaineley XD.
Love this line:
"After all, a Mamacita in distress was a terrible thing."
And have to make some little notes in these ones:
"Ai yai yai..."
That's the pronunciation is Spanish, but it spells "Ay ay ay"
"Siéntase libre de probar, hermoso."
"Hermoso" is in masculine, in this case it should be "hermosa"
Other than that, is a nice oneshot: Portraits perfectly Heather's resistance to let down her defenses with Alejandro and his difficulty to keep focused on the game when he's getting more interested in Heather. Great job!
| Contemperina chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Oooh, that was really good. You got their characters down really well. Not that this is anything new, of course. (: I'd like to see you do some more Aleheather!
| can't think chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
| Islanda chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Awww! This was a cute little fic! You should totally write more Aleheather! You're very good at it! :D
| Flutejrp chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Eh, Not bad for first Aleheather story!
| babydon'tletmefall chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
That was awesome. :) I love AleHeather, and this was just icing on the cake... whatever that means.
You know what I just thought? AleHeather is a really horrible mash-up name... I'm serious, Duncney, Gigette, and then AleHeather? It's not even a mash-up name, it's one name and half of another. XD