Reviews for Eternal Objective
LAdy chapter 12 . 6/15/2013
UPDATE ! UPDATE ! UPDATE !
isabelle705 chapter 12 . 6/12/2012
! I put dis to mah favourites!
isabelle705 chapter 8 . 6/12/2012
Are you finished yet? Don't know, don't care. But if you're not finished I encourage you to write more. You rock! :) ;) ;D :D C: C; Lololololololol
MyLiloITAChIassasin chapter 12 . 12/27/2011
nice story! freakin naruto!
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 12 . 8/20/2011
sweet
in your dreams as well chapter 11 . 7/21/2011
I want the summery
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 11 . 7/21/2011
cool
in your dreams as well chapter 10 . 7/14/2011
I though galletas was crackers... Oh well there prob the same
Marium chapter 2 . 7/14/2011
hey hey hey lol i read up to chap two and i want some demands met before I continue reading . grgr lol well first of all edit really good before you put this in! that way u wont slip when u randomly switch between the third person and first person view. also other than that for the main plot, i think things are going a bit too fast. i mean maybe its just a bit too fast looking for me but i would like more explanations. for example i mean helllllo im at chap two and already hinata sounds like she's in her pms-ing stage T.T u dont have to go with the sobbing hinata in naruto try to toughen her up and add ur own quirks too! as for sasori, well i pretty much totally love his character XD really easygoing and stuff but one prob, he's too touchy! they touch eachother too much and too awkwardly and randomly for it to hold any significance other than the fact they enjoy doing...things... T.T lol joke intended anyways other than tht its really nice! u got a solid plot and obvious conflict developing, and while u need to solidify their character a bit more, it is fanfic so i'll give u a pass at some more effort. just remember details details details! and also EDITING! closely! berry berry closely *make tiny evil eyes* lol
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 10 . 7/14/2011
cool
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 9 . 7/12/2011
sweet
in your dreams as well chapter 9 . 7/11/2011
Yyyaaayyyy sasukexhinata
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 8 . 7/6/2011
damn
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 7 . 7/6/2011
cool
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 6 . 7/6/2011
damn
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