|Reviews for The Scenic Route|
| spikesleaf chapter 1 . 11/11
I'm completely and utterly blown a-fucking-way. I've been reading fan fiction for longer than I care to admit, and at this point I feel as if I've seen it all, as if nothing could really affect me anymore. After reading your story, which is nothing short of brilliant, I realized how damn wrong I was.
Your story is beautiful. The characters are portrayed perfectly. The references to the show are amazing. The plot is unique and clever. I actually teared up during some of those Stan and Kyle moments; their adoration for each other is heart warming, yet their relationship isn't perfect, which makes it real and believable. And don't even get me started on the smut chapters. Holy jesus balls, that was heaven.
Thank you for writing this. Thank you for creating a wonderful story with beautiful relationships while staying true to the spirit of South Park. That's not an easy thing to do, but you make it look effortless.
| UNKOWN PEACHES chapter 8 . 4/4
THE UNIFORM- OMG LIKE THAT ONE EPISODE- I CANT-
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/30/2016
Okay goodnight I'm going to go cry myself to sleep now. :)
| sparklesthefairy chapter 8 . 9/15/2016
I've read this story about 4 times now, still love it each time. Thank you Hollycomb 3
| lutecelabs chapter 8 . 7/16/2016
ive finally decided to review this masterpiece. i read this back in 2014 and its been my absolute fave for all of eternity ever since. i cant even begin to tell you how many times i reread this. its amazing from start to finish.
the south park and stankyle fandom is blesseddddd to have this fic and your writing. ive ventured to other pairings and fandoms since 2014 but i always feel dissatisified. im insatiable now bc no other pairing is as graced as style. you have such a variety of fics, and updated regularly/finished with superb writing, pacing, characterization, and a plethora of AUs that usually i might pass over but you do anything justice. you could probably do something as horrific as an everyone is cartman au and i would absolutely adore it with my heart and soul because ur the best i hope u kno that thank u
| Dakota chapter 8 . 7/14/2016
I know this was published years back, but I'mma be real honest with you. In all my 7 years of reading fanfictions of ANY pairing, this was profoundly the most perfect. I had 0 complaints which never happens. And I'm emotional it's over. I never get emotional over fanfics. This was the BEST fanfiction I have ever read and I'm just so fucking happy I found it. You deserve a round of applause and a standing ovation. STUNNING!
| Mekabella21 chapter 8 . 6/20/2016
I'm so sad to see this end. I can't believe they are getting married. I'm all excited. Stan is so sweet with Kyle. Super cute.
Love your writing. The pace and build up was awesome. I hope you have more stories for me to read. I'm about to find out.
| Mekabella21 chapter 7 . 6/20/2016
I don't mind this chapter being long at all. Plenty of lemons and fluff. This was a serious chapter though. Everything Kyle was telling Stan about his college career and possible career in football was true. Times are constantly changing but it doesn't hurt to be careful. I'm glad Kyle stopped fighting against fate and decided to give in. I am sure he will not regret it.
| Mekabella21 chapter 5 . 6/19/2016
I did not see any of this coming. I got excited thinks my Stan and Kyle will finally have a moment and here comes Cartman *rolls eyes*
Kyle is being really stubborn. Stubborn to the point were he is not fully listening to what Stan is saying In My opinion. I don't blame Stan for taking the college that offer a signing bonus like I don't blame Kyle for taking the school that offered him a full ride.
Got 3 chapters left, let's see what happens.
| Mekabella21 chapter 3 . 6/19/2016
Of course Kenny is dating Butters. They are good for each other. I never liked Butters parents. He is the sweetest kid and they treat him like shit. I'm glad he found an outlet in Kenny. I dislike they have to go out of the way to Butters but I am glad they are.
| Mekabella21 chapter 2 . 6/19/2016
Loving the beefy chapters. I wonder what is going on with Kenny. You captured Cartman so well. I find myself being annoyed with him just like I do when I watch the show.
| Mekabella21 chapter 1 . 6/19/2016
Addicted already! I love the little back stories of what happened in middle school and high school with some of the characters. This is the first fan fiction I read that mentioned jimmy. I got all excited.
I can't believe they are all going to different schools so far apart. I am proud and happy for them but feel like Kyle. It makes me sad.
Looking forward to see what happens on the road trip.
| Shikima Akemi chapter 8 . 6/15/2016
Sex-parts aside, this story was really beautiful, even made cry in the last two chapters!
| KeruKeru chapter 8 . 2/20/2016
I don't even know what to say. This story has the perfect mix of emotion, both from the characters and the readers' perspectives. Every time they got close and Kyle or Stan ruined it all I wanted to do was scream.
In fact, I actually had to scream into my pillow when I finished chapter 6 and read the first paragraph of chapter 7. I lost my mind because I kept thinking "Stan will go after him, he'll go after Kyle and they'll have this big scene in the airport where they profess their love for each other". And then Kyle's been at PennState for months and I just screamed into my pillow. It may have been due to lack of sleep since I was reading until 2:30 in the morning and my emotions got the better of me, but still.
Then there's Kenny and Butters. I got chills thinking about Butters alone in that hole, sobbing, especially since Kenny was the one to find him. Of course, this was also during the "Butters is supposed to be in this story, but it's chapter whatever and he's still not here". Their relationship is so adorable and I have to say I relate to Kenny a lot. Not because I do porn or dropped out, but because I honestly feel like a burden on a lot of people. He's got someone like Butters to keep him happy, but I don't. I digress though, too many of my own problems.
Cartman and Wendy is an odd pairing I've come to love recently. I would never write it myself, but other people seem to get it right because god knows their marriage would be full of loud, angry sex. They're both very domineering people and when they clash, I imagine they clash hard, but it's such a forgone conclusion that they probably have such a strong relationship because of it.
But anyway, I just want to thank you for writing this wonderful story because it made me laugh, scream and squeal over Butters' cuteness at all the right times.
| JustPassingBy chapter 8 . 12/30/2015
Wow, what a story. It had so much going on in it, and I loved every second of reading.
All the characters were portraited so well, and I never thought I'd see the day when Eric Cartman was the one I actually was most grateful for! Just like Kyle I thought he was going to ruin the trip, that the gun would cause them a whole bunch of trouble, but in the end I was so glad that they brought him along.
It was really great to get to read this story, it was awesome!