|Reviews for Eulogy of those Lost|
| lol chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
wait, i don't really get what you said about the red-haired boy Tia held,
is that Jeros, or you said it is Tia and Dekar's child?
this is great
| walkswithwheels chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Finally, someone writes about the remake without bashing it! Excellent story! Although, I would say this.
If you're going to write something using the remake, why not add a few more elements of it to the story? For example, why not add Tia and Dekar to the final battle speech; they were there in the remake. Why not add a few lines about Iris; she may have betrayed them, but she was also their friend.
I think it the switch of scene is a little too abrupt; someone would've seen the supposedly dead couple coming in. I think there should have been at least a little bit of surprise, since everyone thinks they are dead.
Guy’s obviously not by the door if he doesn't see Maxim or Selan coming before his glass is taken away, but someone else might have and reacted. Even though they were technically teleported out the Iris in the Newgame ending, someone would've seen them, don't you think?
Other than that, brilliant fiction, and keep it coming!
| Macavity Omega chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
It's rare to see a Lufia fic, and you pulled it off without a problem.
Not that I'm saying you are bad at this, no. You are a great author.
Keep it up.
(also, does this mean you are going to continue on with For Want of a War soon?)