Reviews for Pokémon: Free and Heather's Adventures: Johto
pokestets23 chapter 67 . 12/2/2013
Seeing as I'm thinking of making a comeback, AZUL! That story is soo good!:) I'm going to catch up tonight and do some things for my own story. Pokestets may be back on FF!
MMJ.Rich chapter 72 . 12/1/2013
Yeah! Azul made his appearance. I wonder what he will bring to the adventure.
wisdom-jewel chapter 72 . 11/30/2013
What is the long story Azul?

Quite enjoyable chapter. I would love to see what happens next.
wisdom-jewel chapter 71 . 11/29/2013
Well good chapter. Now Free has an Onix and I wonder how he will use it. What battles will Onix see and do? Anyway still enjoy Free's personality and him being the unofficial leader. Good luck with the next chapter.
MMJ.Rich chapter 70 . 11/28/2013
It's funny how pumped up Clover gets sometimes.
wisdom-jewel chapter 70 . 11/26/2013
Good update. I'm glad Clover's Bagon evolved into Shelgon.

And I'm sure Anson will appear later in the story. I wish you luck with the next chapter.
Draco55 chapter 69 . 11/26/2013
Finally Heather's Luxury Ball was used.
wisdom-jewel chapter 69 . 11/24/2013
Very good chapter and it is great that you updated again after a long time. I'm guessing your schooling is taking up a good portion of your time. It happens.

I think Sneasel will make things interesting for them for sure. Heather would have her hands full for sure with this little one. Keep up with the good work.
Draco55 chapter 66 . 11/24/2013
wow i've been reviewing a lot. when did Totodile evolve. Twice.
Draco55 chapter 65 . 11/24/2013
PLOT TWIST! I never saw that change coming, but I like it.
Draco55 chapter 62 . 11/24/2013
why did you choose to change the names and make them spanish?
Draco55 chapter 59 . 11/24/2013
ummm, srry, but i've got to point this out. hitmontop didn't damage misdreavus, so pain split wouldn't work. unless i missed something.
Draco55 chapter 44 . 11/22/2013
Training is good for wooper. Evolve him into quagsire. Then he'd rock.
Draco55 chapter 40 . 11/21/2013
They all have shells.
Q1. Dragon
Q2. Is Deka gay, or just a big jerk.
Q3. Don't know. Maybe a Gyarados for one of them.
Draco55 chapter 32 . 11/21/2013
Well it seems that Grimer pulled a Psyduck. Why did he not let her use a different Pokémon instead of Grimer?
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