Reviews for Too Deep for the Healing
Elizabeth Prince chapter 28 . 5/28/2012
Awwww I may cry. So beautiful! I love that Sev received all those beautiful gifts from people that he didn't realize loved him. Can't wait to see what happens next!
wynnleaf chapter 28 . 5/28/2012
Nice chapter. I like the comment "No one can stand up for me unless I stand up for myself." Hopefully he will do that fairly soon.
White Gray chapter 28 . 5/28/2012
YES! I loved it! Well done, Severus! hehe :P

The gifts were perfect, the proposal couldn't be more beautiful and natural and still very much in Snape's character. The candle might have helped him, but he had also changed a lot.

Well done! Can't wait for the next update to see how he's going to manage to get out of prison and clear his name.
grumpirah chapter 28 . 5/27/2012
this chapter was especially lovely. i hope this isn't the calm before the storm.
godwit chapter 27 . 5/17/2012
The clause from Dumbledore's will gave me tears in my eyes. I love how this chapter opens up what seemed like a locked position. A very nice turning point. Beautiful chapter! (As usual...) :-)
Thirteen Ravens chapter 27 . 5/11/2012
Very nice chapter, Thank you! :)
NessL chapter 27 . 5/8/2012

when you said 'new evidences", are you refering to the Resurection Stone? Bringing back Dumbledore from the dead to testimony?

Thanks for posting

AdaYuki chapter 27 . 5/7/2012
LOVED IT! CAn't wait fro the next chapter!
White Gray chapter 27 . 5/7/2012
AAAAAND ACTION! Go Severus! :) Too bad it ended there! hehe...

I adore this, I absolutely love it, I think it's brilliant. Have I said that enough already? Apparently not!

I love how Severus decides to fight for the future, for Irene, for justice. I almost forgot about Minevra's box, but I think it couldn't have come out at a better moment. I liked the contents of Dumbledore's will, too. I think it all gave Severus a much needed feeling of self-worth. It is clear that he puts too much self-worth in others. About time to put it in himself, too!

Oh, I wish I could write like you do! Besides not being a native speaker, I also have no feeling for reality and emotions. I just can't make it deeper, I end up describing the dry details or use too much words. Just have a look at my work, Someone Else, you'll see...
godwit chapter 26 . 4/30/2012
Snape's constant denial of himself and what he wants is so sad. Your portrayal of it is great, though, so full of nuances. I wonder when he will finally let himself find peace. Very moving chapter!
White Gray chapter 26 . 4/29/2012
I honestly don't know how you manage to deliver it each and every time with such perfection and passion, leaving the reader gasping for more. The tension is rising and rising and rising and I don't know how much longer I'll be able to hold my breath!

The ring was a nice touch, bravo Narcissa! How did she know? Simple intuition or more? I believe Snape needed that push in the right direction.

I love the scene in the end. I like how Severus thinks about the consequences of their actions. What will Irene say to him?

Oh please say that you've already written the next chapter and that you'll update super fast!
AdaYuki chapter 26 . 4/29/2012
LOVED IT! I hope you'll update again soon!
Elizabeth Prince chapter 26 . 4/29/2012
Oh wow that was beautiful! I lOVE that last update soon I REALLY want to know what happens!
godwit chapter 25 . 4/24/2012
The conversation between Snape and Dumbledore is very well written. It is very positive as Dumbledore is talking about life and choices. In a way I would have wanted Snape to ask all those questions, but it is probably a good thing that he doesn't, a part in choosing life and not dwelling on the past.
White Gray chapter 25 . 4/22/2012
Damn, you left me gasping for breath again! I don't know how you manage to put so much suspension in each chapter! Brilliant!

Oh and the twist with the Ressurection Stone in the soil! I usually spot this kind of things miles ahead, but you had me here! Let me guess, the Stone will be Snape's ticket out. That way he won't have to show his memories, they could ask Dumbledore directly.

Who was Draco talking to? And what is in the parcel? Oh please please please update as soon as you can!

Best wishes!

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