|Reviews for On the Mark|
| Fandora01 chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
Maker yes! this is how the Sebastian Story should have gone, freaking chaste marriage my ass ...
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
What happened to Aquila and Obeisance? Those were a couple of your most precious stories :'(
| Ashborn Dragonrider chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
Andraste's holy granny panties... *drools*
| Nichalia chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Hah! If you're going to break your vows, this is the way to go. Yay!
| Illusion of the Mirror chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Oho! How deliciously wicked! Great story!
| Eviza chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
I was firmly Fenris' girl, but then I've read this story on kinkmeme, and now it seems I'm branching into Sebastian as well :). I wish the game did allow us to break his vows. Anyway, this was very hot, now going to read the rest of your fiction.
| FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
awww! they are so cute!
| silentstephi chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Don't know how I missed this one.
Go go gadget Celeste and her 'I am Champion, don't fuck with me Vael!'
| Epiphany sola Gratia chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
I can not begin to tell you how happy I am with this story. I LOVE this set-up. It really makes sense with it happening this way, though I did not think Hawke would take it that far. WOW!
| SorchaCahill chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Whew! **fans self** I love me some fem!Hawke and Sebastian. :)
| atomicpen chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Excellent! I've had my own ideas for Sebastian and Hawke roiling around in my head myself, but this one is exquisitely written!
Good to see someone else with my own line of thinking. *grin*
| starkhaven chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
i realllllllllly liked this story. it showed how wanting to win might back fire on you. your writing style is amazing you show the want in them with out being vugar i ejoyed it a lot. you should write more
| Suilven chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
So steamy - love!
| Torilund Archer chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
| Clever Fox Hound chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Reading about Sebastian forsaking his vows is always exciting. I love it :3