|Reviews for Forgiven|
| Old Emerald Eye chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Its an . . . interesting take on what Phil was thinking/feeling. Interesting and intreaging.
I always imagine his thoughts running more along the lines of 'Anyone have any food' and 'Damn, mermaids are heavy.'
| thebeautyandthewolfe chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
This was soo beautifully done, I can't even tell you. You have a serious gift for writing. The end about how forgiveness feels was so touching. Thank you for sharing it! :)
| Kat chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Beautiful piece of work. The depth of the emotions, I am bewildered that such description, such beauty could come from two completely different people and how their lives crossed paths. Keep writing. From your eyes, heart, and point of view, I was pulled in. Please.. Keep writing.
| Motek chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
You get everything about them perfectly. I absolutely loved that story!
| mooncrossed chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Beautiful. I loved the story of Philip and Syrena, and your story was a wonderful portrayal of everything the missionary was experiencing. Nice song choice, too. Do you think you might do another story from the meremaid's point of view?