Reviews for I Give Up
eenayde chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
But... Deidara was still alive!
Great story though.
There was a typo somewhere in here: "Dei, I didn't mean to," I pleaded.
The two POVs are getting mixed up. That's all.
NotACreativePerson chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
AndThenBurnTheAshes chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Wow...that was not what I expected, but great, nonetheless. Could you do one from Sasori's perspective?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
That's deep yo.
Poor Deidara. Sasori was a bit of a cooc
WhisperOfTheRose chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
O.O Y U KILL HIM? I was listening to Alice of Human Sacrifice, Japanese, and it's kinda creepy. NUUUUH! DEIDEI DON'T DIE!
Jasmiineliip chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Pls do one in Sasori perspective.
LolzYukari chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
zomg i love this story. i bet sasori cried his heart out of guilt, i bet you, yes deidei you don't deserve suck terrable abuse, then maybe sasori would die of guilt yes thats what happened. i love this, i love the ending a lot, its beautiful
BloodIcing chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Oh My God, again, you made Sasori tottally fucking hot. I dunno i think i got this thing for sadist Saso


I'm sad that Deidara had to die though... TToTT

Why didn't Sasori chase him or made a frickin antidote at least TTTT
SweetScarlett97 chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
:O ... Wow. And I thought your "He Didn't Mind" was angsty. I love what you did though. I applaud you. Like a lot. I love your style. In most abuse relasionships(sp?) people don't follow through on the, 'I'll get better' It takes a lot. I'm glad you did this. I should be angry. You killed off one of my favorite characters and split my favorite couple. I'm obviously not though- as a writer, I respect your awesome talent. From what I read of your stories, I think you're best at angst and horror. You don't over-do it like a lot of people do. You make it just the right amount. I wish I could write in that genre- I want to expand my genre ability, and when I write my books, they will have the right amount of everything. Hey, you wanna teach me a bit...? Hahah. _ Epically done.