|Reviews for Varjak Paw 3|
| Sally Bones chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
You are a very talented writer! It feels like reading another chapter of Varjak Paw... My only concern is that Varjak wouldn't always shout at people. Apart from that, well done! :)
| Fredrekotheduck chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
This was a great fanfiction and i can see how much effort you've put into it. However, improving the word choice might be a desirable idea and instead of saying how the characters felt, express them in their speech and actions.
| Directioner5ever chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
| sparkle121 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
it was good please write more
| jayfeathe1r2345 chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Great story!You didn't say what happened to Holly's mother KILLED TAM!I LOVE HER!why WOULD YOU DO THAT,WHY?!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
I think it was good but not as good as my vertion
| Skystar chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
That was beautifully written. LOVE IT!
| NeneKanerva chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
This was amazing. That's all.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
I like your style of writing, work on your plots a little though...
| The Notorious Willow Storm chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
That is awesome 10/10
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
this is very good but you didn't say what happened to holly's mother
p.s you sometimes miss letters or words so reread it too make sure there are no more mistakes