Reviews for Varjak Paw 3
Fredrekotheduck chapter 1 . 4/13
This was a great fanfiction and i can see how much effort you've put into it. However, improving the word choice might be a desirable idea and instead of saying how the characters felt, express them in their speech and actions.

:)
Directioner5ever chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Update!
sparkle121 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
it was good please write more
jayfeathe1r2345 chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Great story!You didn't say what happened to Holly's mother KILLED TAM!I LOVE HER!why WOULD YOU DO THAT,WHY?!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Ha.24 hours?!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
I think it was good but not as good as my vertion
Skystar chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
That was beautifully written. LOVE IT!
NeneKanerva chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
This was amazing. That's all.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
I like your style of writing, work on your plots a little though...
The Notorious Willow Storm chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
That is awesome 10/10
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
this is very good but you didn't say what happened to holly's mother

p.s you sometimes miss letters or words so reread it too make sure there are no more mistakes