Reviews for What if?
UCAV-EDI chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
I have to agree. The story has grasped me since the first sentence and held me in it's grip. I want more. Please continue this story, the idea is too great to be tossed away.
Barnswallow13 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
I definitely think that this is worth continuing. It grabbed my attention from the first sentence. Your flow is excellent, and your grammar is flawless. Also, the concept is intriguing. Now, I know that's not really much coming from a new member, but if you continue this, I'll read it for sure. Keep up the good work!
StealthKaelly chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Oh finally, finally! After more than two years, some one is actually writting Stealth fic, I thought I am the only one on Earth :D Please continue in this, I had these thoughts too, but I never did it, please make more, I want to see your ideas here :)