|Reviews for Amazing|
| BookWorm56 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
You know what's strange? I have been obsessing over my weight for the last couple of weeks now. I've been like crying and stuff, because I have to go to high school looking like this. And then I get in my inbox. I love this story, it's just... amazing! You made me feel better about myself.
| lobsters4ever1 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Awwww, I loved this. I always adore a nervous Edward and confident Bella.
| Evelyne-raconte chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, YOUR AMAAAAAAAZING OS. Thank you so much for sharing and happy birthday to Mélanie.
| scrosby66 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Loved it... so much! Happy Birthday Melaine! Thanks so much sheviking, for writing about a Bella most of us could be...Thanks!
| GLee68 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Happy birthday Melanie...
that was amazing!
staring at the screen in wordless admiration!
| FFFan1664 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Happy Birthday Melanie. What an amazing gift!
Thanks, Sheviking for sharing it with us.
| bananafox chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
sweet and fun. a very nice birthday present.
| buffbronze chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
That was fab..what a treat for Melanie and for us. I think this would have been great plot for a long story.
Happy Birthday Melanie!
| Ms.LadyOfCalibre chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Beautiful one-shot! I loved it...
Thanks for sharing!
| throwaway976235 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
OMG! I am so glad your comment on twitter about a pint of ice cream being good for a *single* Bella was for this o/s! Part of me was terrified it was for Education of Prof. Cullen! I thought "whaaa? Single? What's gonna happen?" Lol!
This was super sweet. I love that you covered Bella actually getting down to a size 4 and not feeling any more confident until she finally just becomes comfortable in herself. Personally, I was 115 lbs and 5'9" for most of my life and still felt "fat". After getting up to a size 16 due side effects from a medication, my weight balanced out at 145lbs and size 10. I have never felt more confident and beautiful than I do now with curves and a softer body. The things you mentioned - jutting hipbones, ribs, etc - these are all things that I associated with being the "proper" weight. It really came down to my own perception - I had the physique you see on runway models, but I still felt unhappy with my body because I just was not confident in myself. Once I gained that confidence, my weight didn't matter because I felt beautiful.
Anyway! I didn't mean to give a whole spiel like that, but obviously topics like this mean a lot to a lot of women. I just love when Bella is written as confident when she's the size of the average woman.
I also really enjoyed that there was an awakening for Bella about Edward as well. She had made her own assumptions and stereotypes about him and who he was, and I thought your method of making the transition from "Edward Cullen" to just "Edward" in Bella's mind was a great way to showcase this.
My one complaint is that I really thought a titty-fuck would have been super hot to read (ha ha!). Even if he didn't come on her face (which I would have found hot, but I know not everyone does), I was hoping he was gonna follow through with his dirty talk! ;) Maybe you can work it into "Education"? Lol! I know Professor Cullen would enjoy using Isabella that way :P
Speaking of EoPC, that is next on the list for you to work on, yeah? The Prof & Isabella have been left in a bit of limbo, and I am SO anxious to see some closure for these two. I am also super-excited to see one of your chapter stories get marked "complete" lol! Anyway, I know you're busy but I hope that "Education" is next on the list to be worked on when you do have time.
I just love you and your stories and this one shot was... amazing (of course!).
| ComeToTheDarkSideWeHaveC00kies chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Happy birthday Melanie! To are lucky to have this amazing one shot written for you!
| HopeStreet chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
What a special birthday present for Melanie! She is one lucky girl!
I loved, loved, LOVED the story!
| Lfcpam chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Amazing...it was a great o/s I loved it
| misswella chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Thank you, made my day.
| Milady D' Hiver chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
1. Happy Birthday Melanie!
2. Nice birthday present!
well since you said she was a size twelve i never thought of her as fat. Tanya and her friends did that because they were jealous of the...mm tits they'll never have, at least naturally. (tanya was first tanya no-tits and the became tanya fake-tits). Anyway i hate when people laugh at the fat kids. But high school would be high school, right?