Reviews for Evolution
Wings of Air chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
Aww, I LOVE this!
thebicky chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
Ahhh, so much more satisfying than the movie :3
Fan chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
Lovely. Wish this was how the movie really ended.
Phoenixhp5 chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
awww, if only, if only...nice job!
Nostalgic Beauty chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
If only it could have ended this way!
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
:D I wish. Great story!
Ruffled Phoenix Feathers chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
You should continue this.
Scfilover chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I like how Charles sees Erik's point of view, which enables him to reach Erik, but doesn't give up on the dream of peace either. Great job!
Haylia Jones chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
i really liked this
AirGirl Phantom chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Um, I'm pretty sure I love you, just so you know. XD This is excellent! I have always been utterly CONVINCED that different words would have reversed the outcome of events on the beach, and it's good to see that someone agrees, and better, has the writing skills to SHOW it! :D This is absolutely amazing!
Ie-maru chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Please tell me this isn't a one-shot *puppy eyes*
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
damn i liked this i wish it had goe like this but awsoem job
melpomene94 chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Great story!
Dimac99 chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
The ultimate in wish fulfilment! If only Charles had chosen his words more carefully...
RoxasIsReal13 chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
What I wouldn't have given for such a great ending!
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