Reviews for Evolution
Nostalgic Beauty chapter 1 . 3/14
If only it could have ended this way!
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
:D I wish. Great story!
Victoriam Nox chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
You should continue this.
Scfilover chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I like how Charles sees Erik's point of view, which enables him to reach Erik, but doesn't give up on the dream of peace either. Great job!
Haylia Jones chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
i really liked this
AirGirl Phantom chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Um, I'm pretty sure I love you, just so you know. XD This is excellent! I have always been utterly CONVINCED that different words would have reversed the outcome of events on the beach, and it's good to see that someone agrees, and better, has the writing skills to SHOW it! :D This is absolutely amazing!
Ie-maru chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Please tell me this isn't a one-shot *puppy eyes*
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
damn i liked this i wish it had goe like this but awsoem job
melpomene94 chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Great story!
Dimac99 chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
The ultimate in wish fulfilment! If only Charles had chosen his words more carefully...
RoxasIsReal13 chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
What I wouldn't have given for such a great ending!
Sakurafox666 chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
I know its a one-shot story but if it continued I'm sure no one would complain. XD I think the reason I like this so much is the believability. Everybody (Erik and Charles) stay perfectly in character even as a different path is taken. I would have liked to see Erik's reaction to finding out that his revenge on Shaw was also inflicted upon Charles, both in the movie and here as it could have been interesting to see. But I still this this one shot is great! Wish it could have been canon.
Akua chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Oh yes, wish fulfillment. I do miss it...

If only the movie could have done that. But then again, we wouldn't have gotten the amazing following movies that happened in the future if it did. But still, this is a nice little AU.

... I imagine that being a telepath has limited Charles. Always having one step in to someone. The projection of the surface thoughts and the like. It's hard to ignore that, and you would always know what to say. I could kind of see that in the movie. Charles always knew what to say or do to keep Erik from freaking out and going psychotic... until the helmet.

This was a well written fic. I enjoyed reading it. Good job. :3

-Akua
Kyla Rue chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
sigh... If only this is canon...
Romanec chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
I liked this! :) Do you have any plans to continue? Because it really was the perfect setup for more.

But either way, it's really good. Thank you. _
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