|Reviews for Coming Home|
| Zelda's Hero chapter 44 . 4/7
Please upload the sequel soon!
| Guest chapter 44 . 3/4
| Free2LoveFree chapter 44 . 2/14
Just.. I... what?! I feel like one door shut, and now I'm stuck in a tiny dark room full of very uncomfortable feels. With so many unanswered questions. Like what is going through Lexi's head? What really happened in her and Akasha's past? Who is this Greyella and will she be useful in bringing peace? Are they doing the right thing by numbing Ash and Lexi's connection? And so many, many more.
This story was beyond amazing. But I want it to be completed and there to be some quiet happy times for our favorite group of Fae, vamps, and Sicarii. It sounds like they all need it. Well, maybe with the exception of Lyssandra. That lil witch needs taken out. Anyway, can't wait for the sequel. Even if it does take another few years to complete, I truly hope you don't abandon this story line. It is well written and you have a talent for portraying emotion in your writing that I'm addicted to. Great story. Good luck with your studies and until you grace us with your presence again -happy writing!
| Free2LoveFree chapter 41 . 2/14
How hard would that be to know you have to tell your love something you know will break their heart? You write the emotion so well that I can feel it pouring off the page.
| Free2LoveFree chapter 40 . 2/13
I started this story back when you first started writing it and then lost it somewhere along the way. I don't know what made me decide to look for some good Twi-fics again after all this time, but I thought I'd give it a go. I was ecstatic when I started reading and realized it was familiar, but the story I'd started reading a long time ago -but this time with a LOT more chapters. I'm sadly down to four chapters left but I really can't wait to see how you wrap this up. I love what you've done with the storyline so far! I love all the twist and turns and how you approach and build up each character and arch in the story. You are a fantastic story teller -way better than SM and hell yes I will say that this is soooo much better than the original craptastic series. Really, you could have broken this epic story into 3 or 4 parts by now and still would have had an amazing story. And now that I read there might be a sequel, I'm making sure to favorite and follow this time around!
| A2463 chapter 44 . 1/29
Love it! Really love! Really enjoyed reading.
| Sirens-Are-Singing-Your-Song chapter 44 . 1/26
WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK!?;!? WHY? I have way too many feels to be able to deal with this! I need more! I need to know if Lyssandra killed Peyral. I need them to find that damn stone. I need to know if Bella is planning on giving Ashley to humans. I need Alexia to get the fuck over whatever this grudge is. I have read every single freaking chapter of this story and I'm still at a loss as to why she hates Akasha and the faes so much. I need Dana to stop acting like she cares about the family that she turned her back on. I need the freaking Sicarri to lose something or give up something for their mates. I need Lyssandra to get the fuck off of Alexia's dick. I need Alexia to stop hurting Ashley cus that shit is heartbreaking. I just need more! This wait is probably literally gonna kill me. I'm gonna be in a vegetative state by time there's more to this story!? I hate how good this story is because that makes waiting for new chapters or in this case a new story so damn hard! Fuck all!
| Sammieatszombies chapter 44 . 1/26
... Dat ending... It killed me!
I only found your story last month and I have to say I really love it.
I can't wait for the sequel if you do decide to do one. :)
| Blue-Portrait chapter 44 . 1/26
Alexia is so fueled by her hatred and revenge I'm starting to wonder if she will ever change. I hope Ashley doesn't hate her parents in the future.
| BexCatchingFire chapter 44 . 1/26
I was hoping that Ashley would help Alexia see the light - really loved their interactions.
This was such a great fic, really glad you're not ending it here, look forward to see where you're going to take the story next :)
| Jay aka Jordan chapter 44 . 1/25
This was great and I don't think Ashley should be mad when she comes of age I think she should be understanding. In the sequel can Lucas be mated at like age 10 to a hot girl lol, also Bella needs to connect with her parents more. But PM so we may discuss good luck with school and work :)
| Ravenxxx007 chapter 44 . 1/25
I was really hoping Alexia would see the light for Ashley's sake .-. Kinda heart broken but is good story want sequel when you can _
| ShadowCub chapter 44 . 1/25
Yeah Akasha your family is fucked up.
You get your race wiped out, lose both your kids, the survivors hate you and want to get away from you.
A entire race gone because she broke her promise, wouldn't be surprised if she has some other kid out there. Why should the other survivors trust her, thanks to her all of their kin are dead.
Alexia's stupid brother? I'm glad he's dead he knew this was coming. I'm wondering how his fiance got rid of him, lol.
The mating that everyone has pretty much gone through makes you unreliable and untrustworthy.
Looking forward to the sequel because I don't see how any of this can get better, worse yes but not better.
After seeing what happened to the last vampire king, I wouldn't be volunteering for the job. And the drama never stops.
And the ridiculous strength of the fae, and the hunters really needs to be toned down. I always thought that in canon if vampires were this powerful there would be no way that they would be hiding.
Liking the story even though pretty much everyone in the summary has been reduced to second or third string players in this drama.
Definitely more please.
| MADDY22 chapter 44 . 1/25
Can't wait till the sequel it will be worth the wait update when y can
| A2463 chapter 43 . 1/25
Love it! Really love it! Please continue!
Good for them.