Reviews for Wisdom Beyond Years
ImKim chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
Pretty interesting so far. I love how unique it is. If Snape is kept in character it promises to be an amazing story. I can't wait for more.
marksmom chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
I like this so far! I hope you update soon!
Fawkes1725 chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
It's off to an excellent start! So will it be Snape to save the day?
bumble-beeoncrack chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
aww poor Harry! I can't wait to see what Snape will do! Update soon! and keep up the great work! :)
CheyCheyRainy chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
This is really good and I hope you update soon!


MuggleHarry16 chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
Good chapter! Can't wait till you update again :)
pokemon-hogwarts4eva chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
awesome introduction into how she knew snape

hope he gets in there and saves harry
Darklight-phoenix chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
brilliant :D

get sev in there, save harry from the durslyes...yay!
luvsreading chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
Oh this is such an ah-mazing story! Please update quickly!
David Fishwick chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
Cool idea and please update soon thanks and hopefully Harry won't have to be abused by the Dursleys anymore.
DesirePassion chapter 2 . 6/13/2011

Your fanfic seems really, really interesting. Please update soon. I like how original your plot is. Your writing is very well done. Be careful with OCs because unskilled authors tend to insert themselves into the story and/or create a Mary Sue. But I don't think that Chadwicke is a Mary Sue, I'm merely warning you. Thank you so much for sharing your talent. As previously stated, please update soon. A longer chapter would be appreciated but if short chapters make you the most comfortable then don't worry about it. :D
resainez chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
squibs do tend to make the muggle-magically world bridge a lot easier to cross. hopefully snape will believe her.

I am curious as to whether snape will give harry a chance or will he judge him by his parents first? i am all ways a little giddy when fanfic-ers put spinners end so close to privet drive instead of half way accross the country and then some.

does dudley share classes with harry? what about dumbles reaction there are so many obstacles that could get in the way of harry's rescue i can't wait for the next part.
backtolondon chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
Good job so far!
meggySky chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
nice chapter! I think this story has a lot of potential!
Feenrai chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
Wonderful chapter, just as I suspected! Everything is clearly well thought out and proof-read, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here!

One thing I will point out, however, since you seem to obviously care about what you've written (it shows:) ), is a slight error near the top when you wrote:

"At that moment, the bell rang, signalising the end of school. English had been their last lesson, the only lesson after lunch."

But followed it up with:

"Miss Chadwicke shouted over the scuffling of thirty-two seven-year-olds packing away their things to get to lunch on time"

I think the latter, about getting to lunch on time was some kind of typo:) I really don't mean to be nit-picky or anything, I'm only pointing it out, as I said, because you seem to truly care about making your story well-written and clear:)
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