Reviews for Oblivious
charm13insomnia chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Aw, that was so cute and sweet. Suzaku and Lelouch are so cute and adorable together. Lelouch is my favorite character! Suzaku is my second favorite character!

I loved this story so much!
Sapadu chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
And God said 'Let there be porn.' and there was and He Blessed it and it was very good. But that's not all, what else… Well, funny dialogue, well-crafted third-person narration, structured, solid characterization… Oddly, Schneizel stands out a lot in this - probably because he only appears in one scene, but his presence is implied in all the dialogue and thoughts Lelouch has for the rest of the fic, which makes his control over Lelouch's life all the more threatening and kind of real… In a porn fic.
Also… there were SEVEN guards holding Suzaku back in the last scene? …Oh, I see what you did there! Clever, clever. And while in Suzaku's apartment, Lelouch writes SEVEN songs! …And an additional five, which is one too many to make eleven, total, so… was that just a random number you pulled out? If it was, I'm disappointed.
But, apart from that (originally, I wondered what kind of 'star' Lelouch was, since he's apparently a pop idol, but he's in a movie… but if Britney Spears and Jessica Simpson have 'acting' and 'singing' careers, I guess anything goes) this is always a fun little diversion.
Cieltsuki chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
This is so adorable and hot, I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Lelouch is just toooo cute! Love his uke side!
Destiny.Hope45 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
XD I so love this!
Read this a time or two before now, can't remember if I reviewed, to lazy to check.
Suzalulu goodness! yummy!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
0Requiem chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This was such a fun and cute read! Lelouch really does have it in him to become a popstar, and, for some reason, I found it hilarious that Suzaku was a telemarketer. lol, I wouldn't mind getting a call from him. Their interactions were really entertaining (in more ways than one X)), and I'd most definitively be one of those fangirls screaming at the Suzalulu kiss.
Also, I always love how you portray Kanon. From the anime, I took him for a much more serious and less flirty character, but I like your quirky version of him so much better! I sure wouldn't mind it if you wrote something around him and Schneizel.
Anyways, very good work! But that's a given with you ;)
Burning Souls chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
hehehe, nice ending!
Wolf of Summer chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
This is the perfect blend of funny and sexy. And I would definitely read a sequel if you decided to make one. (you SHOULD!)
iceley11 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
"…we are not doing anything with your brother sitting right there, watching!"

Why not? LOL
Lovegranted chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
cute! I really liked it... but the conclusion seemed a bit fast... the beginning was more like the starter to a multi-chapter story than a one-shot... Lulu and Suzaku are just adorable as always... well, almost always...

I never did understand Kanon, weird fellow :P oh well, I like the singing theme... I wish there was more of that though... you kind of brushed off his stardom (esp. the Nunnally and Euphy part)

Anyways, this is a great piece, good job!
Eien-Kiseki chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
OMG This one-shot is so sexy and amazing :D! I love it!
charisel chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Omg I fuckin loved this... It's gotta be my all time favorite now! I love the portrayal of the characters in this, the smuty scenes... Everything! (з)
Riverspirit86 chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
I know that you said that you don't normally continue your one-shots... but... PLEASE CONTINUE!

Your writing style is absolutely amazing!

Love the Citrus~ :3

This reminds me of another SuzaLulu story titled: Vengeance is Sweet and it's by Strawberry Scented Paperclip if my memory serves... It's different, but similar in some ways.

Anyways~ Lovely story! :D
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