|Reviews for Void|
| the Oracle of Akemi chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
| Multicoloured Lotus chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
I laughed at the part when they make the 'notes on what not to do' for some reason. The rest was just so awesome, I never thought of the idea that Homura could put Madoka in her shield. Also, did Mami turn into a witch in the end?
I noticed some little flaws in the plot. I think Madoka was way too 'accepting' that Homura had kidnapped her. In a shield. Knowing Madoka, I think she wouldn't just ask Kyubey about the Puella Magi straightaway. I don't know if that was just me. Other than that, I hope you can continue the story, I'm itching to know what is going to happen!
| Markus Ramikin chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Funny premise, and I really like the possibilities of Madoka and Homura cooperating from the start of each timeline.
I see it's not marked as "complete" so I hope you're going somewhere with this!
| Snork chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
for a moment I thoought, lol, she should have done that in the anime... but then again, we don't know how the shield compresses objects and whether it's safe for living beings...