Reviews for Absolution
DoodlingPlume chapter 3 . 11/25/2014
I only reached the third chapter so far, but I have to say that I am in love with this fic! It's just amazing how you fleshed out each of the characters, without making them look mechanical! I especially love how Erik especially isn't just some villain with a grand scheme, but is still frail and 'humane' in a way! and BAMF!Charles! I'm in love.

Thank you for writing this amazing fic!
rebecca-in-blue chapter 4 . 11/16/2014
First Class ended rather abruptly, so I'm really enjoying your take on how things might've played out differently afterwards. Curious to see what will happen if/when the other mutants find out what really went down between Erik and Charles.
Melissa hearts fiction chapter 13 . 11/6/2014
Omg I loved this story it's great it's about time charles got a power upgrade I'm a little confused about the time jump, what happened to Jean? But I don't really care i love this story to much most of all cos it's not a cherick one why just way?! Anyways I really look forward to the next update! Xx
rebecca-in-blue chapter 3 . 11/4/2014
Oh my gosh, you were kidding when you said this was a dark take on post-First Class events, and especially on Erik and Charles personally. Such stunning, spooky work, and I can't wait to read the rest!
Jdragonfire29 chapter 13 . 11/2/2014
While i enjoy the story and your ideas...the writing is all over place in plot. It is something that plagues many of us when drafting. I think you should pull it all together and try to get it organized to improve up on the flow. Bravo for story idea, but you need to pull it together to make it more cohesive.
I.C.2014 chapter 5 . 6/17/2014
This story is literally all over the place. If you want these alternate scenes, just write an alternate story, otherwise these seemingly random scenes just takes away from the cohesiveness and flow of the story. Now it's not making any sense
Wolfa Moon chapter 14 . 6/14/2014
you might want to look at the posting on chapter 14
icanhearthedrums chapter 12 . 12/20/2013
WOW! ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS CHAPTER! Onslaught was amazing...and might i say that raven deserved every bit of that tirade
Leila Secret-Smith chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
I really like this story so far, since its so well written. But when Azazel takes them to the hospital all I can think of is that moment in the X-Men HISHE when the nurse says "Oh LAWD, the devil's droppin' off patients in the ER!" xD
icanhearthedrums chapter 10 . 7/21/2013
The story would be so much better if it all went from beginning to end instead of beginning, AU, then end, then back to story and then jumps to another part of the end again. This story is very well written and i LOVE LOVE LOVE ONSLAUGHT but the incoherency is really starting to get annoying. Please edit this
casjowar chapter 6 . 6/20/2013
I'm not sorry at all! Please, continue! XD Slaughtering their persons that is...and I'll just be over here waiting 'patiently' for the next chapter. ;)
Guest chapter 6 . 6/7/2013
I don't exactly know how things got here, it's a bit murky and disjointed but the bottom line is: Charles is crazy - and I love it. You make an interesting dark! Charles.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/8/2013
I would have to say that the summary was a lot to take in - especially Charles' death. I've always had a thing for Charles, he's just my favorite and to have him die is such a hard blow. I wouldn't mind if he goes and finds himself in another body (some more angst in between perhaps) then he goes and meets all the others. But I do say the idea is great, and I would love if you did continue this. Good luck! Waiting for the next chapter! (Although a bit of editing is in order?)
Frostonthetrees chapter 4 . 5/2/2013
Please keep it going,as it is a awesome story,and messes with my feels!
Fran Fiction chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
I like the individual bits but there is no cohesive thread, it's choppy and hard to read, you're not doing yourself any favours. This isn't meant to be a negative review, there is a lot of potential but along with all the mistakes it falls short of the mark. It actually states in the fanfiction rules, before you post a story, that author commentation within the story's flow is not allowed; please leave your comments for the bottom. If what you are trying to phrase cannot be explained in a small postscript or within the story you need to phrase it better.

My advice would be to get a beta.

Regards, Fran Fiction
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