|Reviews for Doubly Rude and Once Ginger|
| BundleofContradictions chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
Oh, that was brilliant! I wouldn't say that your characterization of the Doctor was off at all, but I felt like I was reading more than one version of him in this chapter, which isn't a bad thing at all (and was probably all in my head, as I've been watching way too much "Who" lately!). Of course "Allon-sy" is so Ten/Tennant that it shattered the illusion!
Kushina's only being a good kunoichi. She has *plenty* of reason to be suspicious, and she's asking all the right questions while trying not to give herself away. It would be too easy for her to reveal that she's suspicious because she's been kidnapped before; but a good shinobi (especially a jinchuriki) would never, ever say that! (I do hope it is revealed later, though, I like the idea of the two of them bonding more).
I wonder where they are? My first thought was Orochimaru's layer! (Yay! Exciting!) But A. It might be too early in Naruto's canon for that and B. It makes more sense for it to be related to the Stone shinobi.
So far, the Doctor figuring out the technical aspects of the ninja world while Kushina shows off her awesome practical prowess in those techniques is working well in keeping both characters on their toes. I liked the Doctor's rumination on Shadow Clones, and Kushina's response that she never thought of it that way (wouldn't it be wonderful~and I'm totally head-canonning this~if Kushina tells Minato how the Doctor suggested that using Shadow Clones is like learning two things at once, and Minato develops the Shadow Clone training technique based on the Doctor's theory, which he teaches to his student Kakashi, who in turn teaches it to Naruto. Thus, the Doctor is behind Naruto's most effective, signature training technique? Heh! Clever!)
My biggest concern is that the Doctor will absolutely despise this bloody, hatefilled, violent, war-torn world as soon as he figures out how it works. But he's dealt with militant cultures before; I'm sure he won't take his disappointment of Human(oid) nature out on any individual! (especially on lovable Kushina!) If anything, maybe he'll suggest a thing or two about how peaceful things could become if the people of this universe move past their cycles of hate and war. A sentiment, we know, that Naruto holds dear and is striving for. (Pain gave his life for this idea, dang it!)
I *love* both your stories and I hope you recover from your writer's block quickly! If you want to brainstorm aloud, feel free to PM me!
| Cylon One chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
I'd been looking forward to this.
| SrgntDrew chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
good to see this story again! can't wait for more!
| Zaralann chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
| QueenofQuill chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
Love it. Kushina is a great character, probably my favourite. I am so glad she has be put in a good crossover at last.
| mangacrazy96 chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Love the start of it. Update soon.
| BundleofContradictions chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
I read this story some time back and forgot to leave a review!
I loved this story! I think the way you wrote the Doctor's interactions with Kushina worked very well. Kushina is a character that one can have a lot of leeway with, since the only canon appearance of her in Naruto is through flashback. And yet she still comes across as one of the most well developed female character in Naruto! She can use a lot of love in fandom, and who better to interact with a strong young woman than the Doctor?
It also puts him in an interesting situation, since this is a world that is very dangerous and he has no familiarity with it. Let him depend on a female 'companion" for a change! He's going to need some help is he's going to spend any time in the ninjaverse and survive it. Throwing Minato (and, perhaps, Minato's team, and/or Jiraiya) in the mix would make for a very fun adventure indeed!
I'd love to hear back from you! I've always enjoyed your review replies from "Telos" and am still looking forward to the next chapter in that story.
| as8fu749tdsafjq03 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Sounds really intresting, adding to favorites.
| intoxicatedasphyxiation chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
Continue, surely. Especially if it's only supposed to be a few chapters long. Crossovers are hard to find, and a completed set would be lovely for fans of both series to find. Nice job so far.
| Archangel Igneel chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I could DEFINITELY get to like this story, its so Doctor...but SO Kushina at the same time.
I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this, so please continue.
| spaycesickle chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
This is off to a really interesting start! Honestly, I'd love to see it continued some time. These fandoms don't really crossover much, like you noted, so a well-written fanfic is exactly what's needed! And it's off to a typical Who start! Great work so far :D
| Personinplane chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Please. -uses puppy eye jutsu- update soon!
| eriophorum chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Interesting story :) can't wait for the next update!
| Cylon One chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I think it's worth continuing.
Got my interest enough for it.
| Sakuma Drops chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
YES, I love it! lol, never thought i enjoy DW/Naruto...but it was funny. continue please!