Reviews for Movie night
4m3r1p4n-insta chapter 1 . 8/10/2016
hey! I just want to say a few things to improve this fic.
1. Yes, Japanese tvs are better than american ones (as well as toilets)
2. Japanese snacks are really good
3. America can read the atmosphere but chooses not to
Thanks! (the fic was amazing otherwise)
Otakunerdworm13 chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
That was perfect! I nevre thought I wuld be able to find a good Ameripan lemon but behold! I have! That was amazing! Arigoto for bringing this beautifully steamy piece of literature into the world!
writingwithlesukii chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
I think I died. This... This was precious.
DorisMae chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
OKAY OKAY SO GOOD POINTS FIRST
AmeriPan is one of my favorite pairings. I canNOT believe how few other people like it! This was a delicious lemon, especially considering how few there are of these two. I mean just LOOK at how cute they are together (:
SO YOU SHOULD MOST DEFINITELY WRITE ANOTHER AMERICAxJAPAN!
I loved this setting of this, like with Japan's *ahem* movie and all.

Negative points-
Just please remember to start a new paragraph each time the speaker changes. Oh, and there were a couple grammar mistakes, but just proofread your story before you post (:
HetaPoke4Evr chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
THIS IS SO SEXY I LOVE IT!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Omg this was the best fan fiction I've read in a while
aphameripan chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
yay, lemon! i can know love my OTP even more
NykiTyki chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
ROTFLMFAOOOO!
"IT SAYS HE GETS WILLING."
EPIC.
LOVED IT, GREAT STORY. X3
Japanandsaltyfish chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Aww! So cute! It was well written! I couldn't stop reading!
The Awesome March Hare chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
So cute. I love it.
102faith103 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Wow.. That's was REALLY good. I really loved this one :D. You made my day! Hehe.. They should do something.. *cough* rough.. xD good job!
Shylittlebunny09 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Ha ha, this was very funny, cute, and a wonderful idea. Glad you thought of it! Very good job! :D
Lightbeauty chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Why doesn't this have more reviews? Seriously? It is REALLY well written and in character. XD

I loved it, cute, sexy and sweet all in one.
Phs1998 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
It was cute :)

And i dont thing any of the translations was wrong... but next time, think about more details at the lemon scene! It was far too short
Reow chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Hawt!

There needs to be more USA/JAP fics like this!

Good work
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