Please, syrrah, could you write some more? : )

They forgot the birth control. Dun dah dunnnn...

:) loving this. I hope you are able to continue it sometime

I know its been practically forever but I just discovered this and please please please update. Please continue. Its beautiful.

Deliciously quirky and well-written. I admire the use of a real, complex vocabulary. Thanks for sharing this with us. I see the last update was a while ago. Are you planning on completing this?

This is such a fabulous story that I can't explain how happy I am I decided to read a fic without the summary. It's one of the best things I've read in a long time, fanfic or otherwise so I'm hoping and praying for an ending!

Your words are beauty and poetry, living things with teeth that sink in and leave behind permanent marks. Are your words found elsewhere too? Somewhere they can flow freer? I would love to hear your version of the end of this tale, though I have a good imagination, I would like to hear about Renee and Pippa's airport reunion, holidays, vacations, flights taken, futures dreamed and futures fulfilled

This is simply beautiful. I just wish you could finish it. I love them all.

I have just sat and read all 22 chapters posted and have sat on an emotional roller coaster for most of this journey, really you need to be writing novels... awesome character development... I was so effected by the death of Hal it was almost embarrassing, such emotional turmoil. Loved the story and would really love more.

wow

I guess that a story with no summary goes this way: author gave up, there is no ending. Neat experiment.

OMG, this story is, not finished! I've been glued to this story since I started, just relishing in the unfolding of the story and your words. They've had me riveted as I devour each chapter and only now do I realise it is incomplete.
I really hope you get back to this. This is the first time where I have felt that we can really understand what is going on in Bella's head when she says nothing at all. We can feel the depth of her, where others just wonder what is going on. In the original Twilight I always felt this was missing but in your words it becomes so true - I just love it :)

Beautiful in its simplicity. I couldn't put it down. I sincerely hope you decide to continue.

Love love love this! Your prose is gorgeous!

Love the story so far :)