Reviews for Five Years Of Bliss
Nyx-Twili chapter 1 . 5/11/2018
I've been reading through lots of dark and angsty fanfiction, but this is what I was truly looking for. Great job, it's so dark and sadistic; my favorite.
dante0085 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Beautiful ina sad way
x.Chrysanthemum.x chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Oh how very dark,twisted, and sadistic... It was amazing! It was sad though
Sir Kavos chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
This is...kinda creepy and very dark. On a side note, however, that's probably one of the most awesome summaries I have ever seen :).
Digital Luvin chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
The fuck is this I don't even...

I couldn't even finish reading this because it unsettled my stomach. I don't know what's going on in that head of yours, but maybe you shouldn't post fics until it's all calm. Your going scare us all.
nightcoremoon chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
...uh...ok?...

Excuse me while I in sit in the corner, wrap my arms around my knees, and start rocking back and forth, careful not to hit my head on the rubber walls.

That was seriously disturbing. I'm serious, you literally need professional help if you said you liked this. You said your therapy isn't helping when you responded to his review for A Hero Taken? Well, I didn't realize you were serious. Unless this was written as a parody (I wouldn't know, blasted technology in video games makes it too hard to play), or during a REALLY bad LSD flashback (what drugs do you kids do again?), you should probably get back to your screamo rap/metal rock-and-roll music and your knife collection and nonconformity and hair over one of your eyes.

You young kids and your blood-and-swear-filled angst. I monitor this profile, to make sure evil like this isn't broadcasted to my child. I'm going to pray for you and take you off of this reminder list. Good bye sir.
XxxJustxAnxEchoxxX chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Okay, that was... holy crap. Excellent portrayal of Jak's darker side and how they're really not just one person. I especially loved how you ended the story with "I'll keep it close to my heart," and 'my eyes closed on that world and I started another.' The way this was written is awesome. Although, I have to tell you, now I'm a bit depressed. XD