Reviews for The Trick is to Keep Breathing |
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![]() ![]() Very nice one shot. |
![]() ![]() Brilliant story... |
![]() ![]() Nice to have more Steve/Danny on this one. Great little piece. |
![]() ![]() Liked this little tag...always wanted to see what happened after Danny was taken to the E.R |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good coda...captured both principals well |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! I really liked this story! I always thought it was weird how quickly Danny bounced back from the sarin, not even counting the t-shirt. I really like your explanation, and also your characterization and dialogue; that last scene in particular is SO them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story to fill in a glaring gap in the tv show! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice fic to fill in the gaps. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! Great job; thanks for posting this! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a good take on that episode |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I am stuck in the hospital, with tubes in places where there should be no tubes, Steven, ever." I can HEAR Danny say that in his voice. You did a terrific job on the dialogue, it felt very natural. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow what a story - this is brilliant. Thank you so much for writing this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this one too! I'm so glad you addressed a lot of what the show glossed over. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderfully written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. I know the writers would show us the bromance if TV shows weren't time limited, so thanks for sharing. |