|Reviews for Conversations Between Adults|
| ifeltfree chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
I love it. I need to know what happens next!
| 2loveybunnies chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Hmm, even though the Boston accent is throwing me with Edward, I am really intrigued by the whole "working class Edward" and Bella's relationship with Emmett. I want more of this story!
Please update soon!
| JennyinOz chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Just read this oneshot. Totally different to what I expected. But in a good way
| TWIce as nice chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
I wanna see how Bella ends up with him, when she's with Emmett!
Plus, the lemons sound HOTT!
| latersedward chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
OH PLEASE PLEASE Continue this story! you got me at Edward's Boston accent. He seems like a really sweet guy that can get Bella's head out of her ass. I need to know what happens next!
| tomystikomou chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Originally I wanted you to continue louder than words but then I read this and fell in love with Edward and his accent. Please please start this first.
| Dayjolie80 chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Loved this introduction! You def need to continue it! Please!
| jansails chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
What is with the review process!
Having Bella feel all guilty about adoring her sweet, caring boyfriend Emmett, but not being ready for the 'I love you's" was perfect.
Been there done that, sometimes they're wonderful & cute, they just don't inspire you.
Edward catching her awkward verbal return of affection was hilarious, he's attracted to Bella & can see she's feeling guilty about not being in love with her boyfriend.
Edward's cocky, charming, considerate, & gorgeous, with just enough persistence to hook Bella.
Drunkella says she will return, bu will sober Bella remember & follow suit?
| arrime chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
this story is great, very already has ne curious .I'm glad you're gonna write a new 'll be fun to see bella with emmet for a while,because the are so different, I'm wondering wht you'll think of next ,to explain why were they together to beggin with. and edward sounds awesome:)
| mona chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
wow,great start! I think this could turn into something great, it's already something dofferent from all the other stories, the whole "one of the parents die bella goes to forks" is kind of overused around here:(
| ami chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
I really like this one! the other one is ok too, but her grandmother is a bit annoying so I'll stick with this one, I like the fact that they aren't in Forks, the accent thing also.
so I vote for Conversations Between Adults:)
| dreamngo4it9 chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Ah! It's such a hard pick! Both are absolutely wonderful and it's only the first chapter. In this one I'm definitely pulled in by the cocky sweet bartender Edward and the very conflicted and confused Edward! The possibilities are endless. In the Other one, I'm pulled in by the sad story and the jackass Cullen... And the intriguing history with Edward Liz and Esme! And I'm a sucker for high school romance!
| danie ray chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
What am I supposed to say?, I read both and maybe I'm Greedy but I would love to read either one. The fact that I'm reviewing this one is not because I like one more, whatever you decide I'm following.
| tigger5600 chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
great start! :)... would love to see more of this, but kinda like the other one a little bit more.. don't know ... gah such a hard decision! LOL
| Janaie42 chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
I just read the Epilogue for Uncoventional and loved it. I immediately had to read your two story ideas and absolutely love this. I'm kind of surprised because I never fall in love with a story so fast.! I love this.!