Reviews for An Entwining of Hearts
rulanpooh16 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Two words... Simply outstanding.
Azno the Godzilla nerd chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
hey i just wanted to say its a nice story and all but if you wanted sex in it you could have huminized them just a thought from one author to anothet and also i would love it if you read my story its called a word to live by and its under sonic and rouge there are only two chaps up but youll like it (hopefully) please review also put this to tell about my story (so sorry T_T)
xXHakaishaXx chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
This has made my night, thank you so much. I came to the MLP section of searching for a good, quick Rainbow Dash/Rarity fic and you delivered on every count. Thanks again!
Anthony1l chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
PromisedCentennial chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Aww!

I completely agree; there aren't enough Dash/Rarity supporters out there.

This was so cute! I favorited this before I reviewed, simply because I love it so much.

Keep up the good work!
Twitchy-Tail chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Great job! :D

rainbowdash and rarity are a cute pairing. w
Rabukurafuto chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
That was quite cute. Just a sweet little piece. It was good to see a new fan fiction work from you as well. I still think I would prefer these without sex in them unless you made the ponies humanoid. Me reading a story with ponies having sex would be like you reading a story about non-trap boys having sex: uncomfortable.

I look forward to more if you ever try though. Even if you write a totally sleazy, irredeemable piece of pony porn, I would still read it at least once to tell you what I think.
dog teeth chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
AHHHHHHH A RARITY/DASH? le gasp! it cannot be! see, i'm not sure if i really /ship/ these two but i've actually been looking for something featuring them but there was, like, /nothing/. but now there is and ahfjl; it was pretty damn good.

writing & dialogue were solid, characters were in-character, and not too mention it was cute. as. hell.

so, uhm, great job. and write more. especially if it involves pinkie. not just because she's my favorite (rainbow & applejack are tied for second and i don't know why i'm telling you this, lololol) but because she's barely included in shipping.

awesommmme job. :)
The Shortest Path chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
That was cute. :D
Rated PonyStar chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
This was really good for your first one. You kept the characters in a believe behavior and didn't rush to much with the romance. Well done and I hope to see more in the future from you