|Reviews for Raw|
| Ajisai-Hosu chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
THIS story was amazing! I loved every second of it, every word had me on edge! I don't typically read a lot of lemon-infused fics but this has an exceptional mix of naughty bits and storyline! Fantastic job! You actually inspired me to continue with a fic I have in the works with hopes of posting soon! Cheers! I hope the years have been good to you as a writer!
| cicibunbuns chapter 13 . 7/4/2016
Sooo... I was kind of excepting this but then again I wasn't. Maybe I wasn't sure of what to expect. I had a feeling of what would happen and I am glad I was a little wrong. Now I love this even if it had a lot of smut. I just really liked this.
| Sir StalkingWarrior chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
I know this story is complete but I just have to say, hook ,line and sinker on this prologue. I want more! :D I'm so excited to read this fic!
| yaoilover1992-2010 chapter 13 . 10/12/2015
Yeah! I loved it there were times i cried and times i was just so pissed, but i'm glad this is how you decided to end it because i thought Paul was going to leave Jake on the beach and then Jake was going to be broken and possibly commit suicide or end up with the Cullen's.
| abjdavis25 chapter 13 . 8/2/2015
I love this storie please tell me there's more to cone I hope you make a sequel to this one maybe somebody get pregnant maybe somebody will get married something's gotta continue with these by young man
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/14/2015
Can you please please please make a sequel? So good, I couldn't stop reading!
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/10/2014
Oh I liked that! More escapades with those boys please!
| teamjacob4lyfe87 chapter 13 . 2/19/2014
A HAWT sexapade fic! Awesomeness :-)
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/30/2014
Wow this was a really cool, I've never read anything like it! Please write more stories like this!
| naughtynati chapter 13 . 12/21/2013
3:49 am and I'm done...who needs more than 3 hours sleep after a good read ;)
| naughtynati chapter 5 . 12/20/2013
That was sweet but I want more vamps.
| naughtynati chapter 2 . 12/20/2013
OMG...Jacob must be so fucking confused after what just happened.
| neko1998 chapter 13 . 10/13/2013
That's adorably adorable! A perfect 4 some! Ne, what if Jake gets pregnant? Will he ever give birth to their children? Polygamia? Sequal please! Just amazing they're all great canidates for Jake!
| Notavirginanymor chapter 3 . 10/8/2013
Sweet mother of god,
this fic of yours is amazing. can't stop squealing...hyperventilating.
| Im outta this world chapter 13 . 9/27/2013
Fucking perfect! That's all I have to say!