Reviews for The Slowest Burn
bhr chapter 28 . 11/17/2014
Charlie & Renee in this chapter are wonderful. I especially loved what Charlie had to say to the point where it hit home. Wonderful chapter, wonderful story :)
betty.p.dixon.3 chapter 37 . 11/11/2014
This was an awesome story! I loved the push and pull of each character. I wish I could know what happened with his mother; but, I think it's irrelevant because Edward found what he needed in Bella. Great job!
ItCan'tRainForever chapter 37 . 11/11/2014
Noooo I don't want it to be over! This is amazing. I couldn't put it down. seriously you should consider writing professionally
blb1000 chapter 35 . 10/21/2014
Love the peen pinata! For my bf's bridal shower I created a new game, Hang the Dong on the Dude. Featuring a poster size blow up from Playgirl & guests each drew & cut out their own dong. (:-P) We've shipped it back & forth across the country as each friend got married.
blb1000 chapter 33 . 10/20/2014
So no more heard from Alice after she spread false rumors or Jasper after he believed them?
blb1000 chapter 32 . 10/20/2014
She could always ask the loser if he'll follow? Makes too much sense for fan fic though. :-P
blb1000 chapter 31 . 10/20/2014
This it's the first we've actually seen or heard of them going to school, only to be nearly kicked out.
blb1000 chapter 30 . 10/19/2014
That doesn't mean anything. He may know what grave yard she's in. I wish his butt would just get thrown in jail so he'd finally hit bottom.
blb1000 chapter 28 . 10/19/2014
Thank goodness for Charlie! Last chapter, she wanted to go to Boston I and now it's Vassar?
blb1000 chapter 25 . 10/19/2014
Have a hard time believing he missed dinner to tell off Alice. What prompted that?
blb1000 chapter 24 . 10/19/2014
Guessing he's out getting high. Why doesn't Roy tell Ed the truth? Why does it have to be her?
blb1000 chapter 23 . 10/19/2014
I really don't understand her doing thus for Roy, against his will? She's going to be in deep shite with everyone. For what?
blb1000 chapter 20 . 10/18/2014
So why doesn't she say, "She did this on purpose to piss you off Edward!"?
blb1000 chapter 19 . 10/18/2014
That kind of escalated quickly over nothing. No reason for her to scream at him to leave like that. Then again, they are children, which we can forget as we read.
blb1000 chapter 18 . 10/18/2014
And no condom. These people are idiots.
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