Reviews for The Slowest Burn
ubuhall chapter 12 . 9/1/2011
well wtf did Mike think was going to happen if he tried to hurt Bella? seems someone is always keeping their eyes on her. He got his ass kicked last time he touched her & he actually thought he could do it again? Edward is being really pissy to Bella, ya know after she said she broke up with Jasper. I guess Edward doesn't want to be just friends & maybe thinks that is all Bella can offer. So will Bella open her mouth & say something to make Edward want to stay? or will she just watch him leave all over again? damn this slow anxious burn is going to kill me! ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 11 . 9/1/2011
okay, so Bella broke up with Jasper, though in a bad way. She is standing up for herself a little at least. She is going to deal with Rose, so hopefully she keeps being herself & doesn't withdrawl with Rose. But Edward? Damn, that is just a screwed up situation! They can't even communicate for 5 seconds & someone is leaving. Perhaps, if they would just freaking sit down alone & be forced to talk for more than a minute they might accomplish something. I know it has to get bad before one of them breaks so I imagine we will be seeing more frustration & feeling the 'slow burn' of their relationship. Just wish it would hurry LOL ;) ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 10 . 9/1/2011
okay I was distracted while reading this last chapter, but I not sure who's porch she was on? I cannot believe she went off on Edward like that & what he said back had to hurt. For Bella still being a virgin she has bad rep for giving out. I guess foreplay is just as bad in high school nowadays though. So how the heck is Bella gonna fix all this? damn! ~Tracey xoxox
Annie67 chapter 12 . 9/1/2011
ohh i really love ur story although bella is a little bitchy cant wait for the next update :)
tin'ca chapter 12 . 9/1/2011
thanks for the update!Great story!
MzBionic chapter 12 . 9/1/2011
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO

DAMN IT WHY DID I START READING THIS NOW! WHY DID I LET YOUR PLAN WORK?

and btw mike chang glee

and that popular to being laughed out thingy... i know i should know the reference but i wanna say easy a and i know thats not right...

and omfg i need this to update now.
MzBionic chapter 10 . 9/1/2011
NFG rocks my socks... please tell me you have their soundtrack covers... omfg soooo good!

and srsly. i hope she's at jaspers.
MzBionic chapter 8 . 9/1/2011
lemme guess... emmy bear to the rescue with the help of carlisle and esme... which brings alice into the picture... and jas cheats so bella splits... right into edwards arms?

or are we playing the rachel brooke pregnancy game?
MzBionic chapter 7 . 9/1/2011
oh emmmmm geeeeeee! you know frou frou? jeebus. we are meant to be. it's legal to get married in cali right? cuz florida most definitely does not allow same sex marriage... lol
ubuhall chapter 9 . 9/1/2011
well Bella seems to be getting a lil backbone with Rose but she is still letting Jasper push her around. She accepted Edward on facebook, which I did not think someone like him would have in this story. but I guess you gotta use all the options you can to get what you want & that is all he is trying to do. I cannot believe she is gonna take Edward to pick out a dress to wear with Jasper, I really don't see this turning out well. Can't wait to see how you write it! ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 8 . 9/1/2011
so Rose is gonna keep it? wtf? She could always give it up for adoption? nah, she probably couldn't be that selfless! Edward is still totally hooked. I was a lil disappointed that Bella didn't tell Edward to STFU & get back in his car & wait until they were ready to go. She has got to blow up on him soon, gez! ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 7 . 9/1/2011
so Bella is being pushed to be the lil Miss for Big Shot Edward? Yeah, she can handle it but she just doesn't realize it yet. It is a lot to handle but it has a lot of rewards too. Real love is very powerful! Can't wait to see what is going to happen with Rose though? ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 6 . 8/31/2011
I gotta say that Bella was pretty selfish there. Obviously Edward is a hard ass & he just opened up to her & she just ignored his feelings. that was pretty low. yeah, she is immature too but come on, have a heart Bella. she needs to apologize to him. she still likes him & even though Jasper is a sweetheart, she should follow her heart. loving this story :) ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 5 . 8/31/2011
well we finally figure out what happened that night, thank goodness! That was definitely hotter than I expected & can understand why Edward doesn't want anyone else touching Bella, especially is a hurting way. So Edward just stared at her in the parking lot, isn't he going to do anything more? she wants him but wants to do what is expected of her instead, I guess her dad wouldn't be too happy either. Is Edward staying away from her home cos dad is chief of police? hmmm, so many questions...on to the next chapter :) ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 4 . 8/31/2011
wtf did Bella do so bad that night? And if Jessica already knows why isn't she spreading the word or blackmailing her already? I love a slow burn, as long as it is worth it, and you are definitely burning it slow! what could she have done so bad? ~Tracey xoxox
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