Reviews for The Slowest Burn
ubuhall chapter 8 . 9/1/2011
so Rose is gonna keep it? wtf? She could always give it up for adoption? nah, she probably couldn't be that selfless! Edward is still totally hooked. I was a lil disappointed that Bella didn't tell Edward to STFU & get back in his car & wait until they were ready to go. She has got to blow up on him soon, gez! ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 7 . 9/1/2011
so Bella is being pushed to be the lil Miss for Big Shot Edward? Yeah, she can handle it but she just doesn't realize it yet. It is a lot to handle but it has a lot of rewards too. Real love is very powerful! Can't wait to see what is going to happen with Rose though? ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 6 . 8/31/2011
I gotta say that Bella was pretty selfish there. Obviously Edward is a hard ass & he just opened up to her & she just ignored his feelings. that was pretty low. yeah, she is immature too but come on, have a heart Bella. she needs to apologize to him. she still likes him & even though Jasper is a sweetheart, she should follow her heart. loving this story :) ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 5 . 8/31/2011
well we finally figure out what happened that night, thank goodness! That was definitely hotter than I expected & can understand why Edward doesn't want anyone else touching Bella, especially is a hurting way. So Edward just stared at her in the parking lot, isn't he going to do anything more? she wants him but wants to do what is expected of her instead, I guess her dad wouldn't be too happy either. Is Edward staying away from her home cos dad is chief of police? hmmm, so many questions...on to the next chapter :) ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 4 . 8/31/2011
wtf did Bella do so bad that night? And if Jessica already knows why isn't she spreading the word or blackmailing her already? I love a slow burn, as long as it is worth it, and you are definitely burning it slow! what could she have done so bad? ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 3 . 8/31/2011
clumsy Bella huh? never would have thought that, LOL. so Jasper survived Edward's beating & didn't even mention anything about what happened, hmmm. so Edward is now stalking her huh? He has to know where she lives, I mean it is a small town. when is he gonna show up at her door? or window? ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
whoa! that was one hell of a night! Edward blew a freakin nut over Jasper being alone with her. I mean, it doesn't take a genius to figure out what was going on when he came downstairs to see Jasper shirtless while zipping up his jeans. so how is Jasper doing downstairs? is he a mangled mess? can't wait to find out. ~Tracey xoxox
moriah2819 chapter 12 . 8/31/2011
Ok. This little bit of fuckawesomeness needs like 10,000 reviews plus. And I am feeling guilty that I haven't reviewed every single chapter but I just was so lost in the story that I was hitting next compulsively. Can't u just like go ahead and post every chapter u have? Lol. I am in love. Newton is such a douche. wonderful character dynamics. Original. I'm addicted and really fucking depressed that there is no next button after this chapter. But I will be stalking my alerts on Friday.
ubuhall chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
OMG, definitely bad ass Edward & I'm lovin it! This is a great story so far, so glad Lemonade Stand recommended it! Off the next chapter :) So why was Bella more upset about the empty food wrappers in Rose's locker than the pregnancy test? hmmm ~Tracey xoxox
MzBionic chapter 6 . 8/31/2011
oh cullen. poor little edward.

i want to hug him. and hold him to my bosom (yea i just giggled writing the word bosom)

i dont want to catch up with where you are in the story... that means i'll be waiting for more!
2BEdwardspet chapter 11 . 8/31/2011
This is one of those stories that should really have a lot more reviews... So surprised. Keep doing what you are doing ... Love it!

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MzBionic chapter 5 . 8/31/2011
ready for the random thought?

so i just read See You Next Friday and all i could think of was

of course-

but obviously the T and F would switch. yea... my brain isn't in the best working order right now.

btw i was laughing so hard that i kinda started cough choking and i aint spicy thai food and now my throat and nose burn... and i'm blaming you. a duck face bwahahhaha.
2BEdwardspet chapter 12 . 8/31/2011
Ok... So I just found this fic from the ladies on twitter... I love it a little too much. I am literally hooked. Just a new another reason to look forward to Friday! Thank you for writing this!

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MzBionic chapter 4 . 8/31/2011
i want to know it all now. puhlease. and if you ever need anyone to pre-read or beta (cuz that means i get to read it before anyone else!) i'd be happy to help ;-)

but ferserial. um. i love this. and i dont mind the jasper bella thing... and im loving your emmy bear... don't like rosie so much.
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 12 . 8/31/2011
Great story!
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