Reviews for The Slowest Burn
shecater chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
What a good edge of the seat chapter! Just makes you want to keep reading to see what happens next! The Lemonade Stand was right!
shecater chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I just read the review for this and they sure were not wrong! On to the next chapter!
sunkissed voyeur chapter 12 . 9/1/2011
Just started reading this after the review on Lemondade Stand. I love me some Badassward! Great start, I'm dying to read more. Pretty please with a cherry on top (pun intended) let Edward be the one to deflower Bella...and let it be as lemony good as the laundry room (LOVED that!). Can't wait for Friday!
bdubs chapter 12 . 9/1/2011
Just started this story and I love it! Can't wait to read more!
zeeber chapter 12 . 9/1/2011
I heard this was a good story and started reading it yesterday. I was very conflicted because I'm a Bella and Edward fan all the way, so Jasper in the picture upset me. You keep throwing Edward and Bella together but keep them apart too. So now I have to keep reading to get to my version of HEA Edward and Bella. There is so much drama in this little high's been years since I was in high school, but I don't remember it ever being so difficult! Looks like I'm going to have to wait for updates now...

Thank you for your words...Brenda
Chloe Masen chapter 12 . 9/1/2011
Newton has a death wish. I sincerely hope it comes true for him. And us.

The facebook antics continue to crack me up. So very clever.

As always, love, love, love it!
ubuhall chapter 12 . 9/1/2011
well wtf did Mike think was going to happen if he tried to hurt Bella? seems someone is always keeping their eyes on her. He got his ass kicked last time he touched her & he actually thought he could do it again? Edward is being really pissy to Bella, ya know after she said she broke up with Jasper. I guess Edward doesn't want to be just friends & maybe thinks that is all Bella can offer. So will Bella open her mouth & say something to make Edward want to stay? or will she just watch him leave all over again? damn this slow anxious burn is going to kill me! ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 11 . 9/1/2011
okay, so Bella broke up with Jasper, though in a bad way. She is standing up for herself a little at least. She is going to deal with Rose, so hopefully she keeps being herself & doesn't withdrawl with Rose. But Edward? Damn, that is just a screwed up situation! They can't even communicate for 5 seconds & someone is leaving. Perhaps, if they would just freaking sit down alone & be forced to talk for more than a minute they might accomplish something. I know it has to get bad before one of them breaks so I imagine we will be seeing more frustration & feeling the 'slow burn' of their relationship. Just wish it would hurry LOL ;) ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 10 . 9/1/2011
okay I was distracted while reading this last chapter, but I not sure who's porch she was on? I cannot believe she went off on Edward like that & what he said back had to hurt. For Bella still being a virgin she has bad rep for giving out. I guess foreplay is just as bad in high school nowadays though. So how the heck is Bella gonna fix all this? damn! ~Tracey xoxox
Annie67 chapter 12 . 9/1/2011
ohh i really love ur story although bella is a little bitchy cant wait for the next update :)
tin'ca chapter 12 . 9/1/2011
thanks for the update!Great story!
MzBionic chapter 12 . 9/1/2011


and btw mike chang glee

and that popular to being laughed out thingy... i know i should know the reference but i wanna say easy a and i know thats not right...

and omfg i need this to update now.
MzBionic chapter 10 . 9/1/2011
NFG rocks my socks... please tell me you have their soundtrack covers... omfg soooo good!

and srsly. i hope she's at jaspers.
MzBionic chapter 8 . 9/1/2011
lemme guess... emmy bear to the rescue with the help of carlisle and esme... which brings alice into the picture... and jas cheats so bella splits... right into edwards arms?

or are we playing the rachel brooke pregnancy game?
MzBionic chapter 7 . 9/1/2011
oh emmmmm geeeeeee! you know frou frou? jeebus. we are meant to be. it's legal to get married in cali right? cuz florida most definitely does not allow same sex marriage... lol
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