Reviews for The Slowest Burn
ubuhall chapter 3 . 8/31/2011
clumsy Bella huh? never would have thought that, LOL. so Jasper survived Edward's beating & didn't even mention anything about what happened, hmmm. so Edward is now stalking her huh? He has to know where she lives, I mean it is a small town. when is he gonna show up at her door? or window? ~Tracey xoxox
ubuhall chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
whoa! that was one hell of a night! Edward blew a freakin nut over Jasper being alone with her. I mean, it doesn't take a genius to figure out what was going on when he came downstairs to see Jasper shirtless while zipping up his jeans. so how is Jasper doing downstairs? is he a mangled mess? can't wait to find out. ~Tracey xoxox
moriah2819 chapter 12 . 8/31/2011
Ok. This little bit of fuckawesomeness needs like 10,000 reviews plus. And I am feeling guilty that I haven't reviewed every single chapter but I just was so lost in the story that I was hitting next compulsively. Can't u just like go ahead and post every chapter u have? Lol. I am in love. Newton is such a douche. wonderful character dynamics. Original. I'm addicted and really fucking depressed that there is no next button after this chapter. But I will be stalking my alerts on Friday.
ubuhall chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
OMG, definitely bad ass Edward & I'm lovin it! This is a great story so far, so glad Lemonade Stand recommended it! Off the next chapter :) So why was Bella more upset about the empty food wrappers in Rose's locker than the pregnancy test? hmmm ~Tracey xoxox
MzBionic chapter 6 . 8/31/2011
oh cullen. poor little edward.

i want to hug him. and hold him to my bosom (yea i just giggled writing the word bosom)

i dont want to catch up with where you are in the story... that means i'll be waiting for more!
2BEdwardspet chapter 11 . 8/31/2011
This is one of those stories that should really have a lot more reviews... So surprised. Keep doing what you are doing ... Love it!

MzBionic chapter 5 . 8/31/2011
ready for the random thought?

so i just read See You Next Friday and all i could think of was

of course-

but obviously the T and F would switch. yea... my brain isn't in the best working order right now.

btw i was laughing so hard that i kinda started cough choking and i aint spicy thai food and now my throat and nose burn... and i'm blaming you. a duck face bwahahhaha.
2BEdwardspet chapter 12 . 8/31/2011
Ok... So I just found this fic from the ladies on twitter... I love it a little too much. I am literally hooked. Just a new another reason to look forward to Friday! Thank you for writing this!

MzBionic chapter 4 . 8/31/2011
i want to know it all now. puhlease. and if you ever need anyone to pre-read or beta (cuz that means i get to read it before anyone else!) i'd be happy to help ;-)

but ferserial. um. i love this. and i dont mind the jasper bella thing... and im loving your emmy bear... don't like rosie so much.
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 12 . 8/31/2011
Great story!
jljkjjk chapter 12 . 8/31/2011
Been reading your story last night and today. I am really enjoying it! Can't wait for the update on Friday!
MzBionic chapter 3 . 8/31/2011
woman. please have bella be vocal and tell these bitches off. PLEASE PUH LEASE PLEASE.


nia77 chapter 12 . 8/31/2011
arrrrggggggggg no! dont leave it there!

run after him bella run!
MzBionic chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
omfg furrealzies...

this is torture reading this amazing story while sitting in the conference room.

it makes me miss middle/high school...

makes me miss the stupid shit i did.

damn it woman... your plan is working a bit too well.
MzBionic chapter 1 . 8/31/2011


seriously... not the brightest idea for me to be reading this while i sit in my mother's place of business (law office of all god damned places)

now i have a wee bit of a problem that cannot be solved. bwahha

you write amazingly! i really like the way you pull the emotions out... it's so raw.

and *drools* the imapala/possession/anger of cullen reminds me of supernatural (dean mixed with sammy... oh nom nom nom)
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