Reviews for The Slowest Burn
Frenzy In Delirium chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
Well the song Lost by KT Tunstall reminds me of Bella in this story because things always seem to go wrong and she gets lost in all of the drama. It's an amazing song and this an amazing story :) Great chapter :)
sambeam chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
Our Deal by Best Coast... seriously the best band ever haha.

and also, this is by far my most favourite story in a verrrrry long time
itlnbrt chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
This whole chapter had me shaking... especially towards the end. First with Mike then I didn't even know how to process or know

what was going to happen with Jasper and Edward showing up to defend her. I can believe it, but I didn't like that Edward walked

away from her and said that it doesn't change anything. I mean, he has every right to feel that way, but we all know his feelings

haven't changed. I like this Edward.. he is very intense and wears his heart on his sleeve with out even realizing it. His emotions

are clear as day, but he is just so rough around the edges. Bella's need to be cool just drives me insane, but high school was like

that. Everyone wanted to be cool, until you didn't because you realized how stupid they were. Anyway, I just love this fic and need

Edward and Bella to get it on ... and for good. I'm sure it won't be that easy, but I suppose I have to wait. lol.

Thanks for sharing.
twilightbabe101 chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
This chapter was so good! I can't believe Mike! What a dick!
Anti-social-psyche chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
I love Edward, Jasper, and Bella but I do not like Rosalie at all. She is really selfish and seems kind of fake to me. She ignored Bella all week (knowing that people would start to pick on her) and then when she needs to be consoled she goes running back to Bella. I hope Bella realizes that Rosalie isn't a good friend
tiderider chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
luv your writing, but why is he so hard on bella all these exceptations, and everyone coming down on her all the time , fuck why does she hav to be perfect, friendships/are two sided both ahav to work for it . jake always annoying what effort does he put in the friendship or rose seems so one sided wth bella and jasper ? so innocent wth alice the little bug in his ear for cullen yah right.. and again wtf he knew hat he wanted from her but never gave her a real chance to catch up to where he was at in the built up relationship in his mind he seemed to hav wth her,, anh now he blows her off just because he can spi
Coolio12 chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
In my mind I replaced all twilight characters with all vampire diaries characters...lol
PurpleBoss chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
Bella finally grew a pair and stood up to Rose! Hell yeah! I am liking this feisty side of her, now she needs to show it to Edward! She needs to grab what she wants and I can't wait for a repeat of the laundry room because that was HOT!

Rose and Emmett sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G! Whoop whoop!

Next friday cannot come soon enough xxxxxx
suzie55 chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
1st - I had a cranberry/blueberry muffin this morning the size of my hand. I discovered I have a small addiction to cranberries in baked goods that surfaced over the last couple of months.

2nd - Your A/N made me laugh so hard. Loved it!

3rd - This story is FREAKING AMAZING! I seriously cannot get enough of it. If you want to slip me extra chappies please feel free. lol. Your story and writing blows my mind in the best of ways. It's incredible and I dropped what I was doing to read it when the alert popped up. I loved this chapter. I love that's it unpredictable but makes sense in a realistic way. Emotions run - they are teenagers and should. You capture that so well. I'm in awe of you.

4th - some of these lyrics remind me of Bella and what she was dealing with up to this point including being ignored by everyone.

"Sink/Let it Sway" by Someone Still Loves You Boris Yeltsin (that might be the best band name EVER btw!)

Pretty girls don't just park where they want to

They gotta go 'round in circles like we all do

Just like a mother betrayed they're gonna find some day

Everything is not OK

I used to think

The whole world's gonna sink

And where will we be

Perhaps under a shrinking Earth

There's a better place for what it's worth.

Head low but you gotta Let It Sway

No miracle gonna happen when you feel that way

Bent up but you gotta let it sway

No firecracker in the dark gonna light your way

Blown out but you gotta let it sway

c'mon now c'mon c'mon

Pretty pretty, so continental

You slide into each other's arms unintentionally

Because you want and you say

Was you cool like me?

Think I gotta say no way, no way

I used to think

The whole world's gonna sink

And where will we be

Perhaps under a shrinking Earth

There's a better place for what it's worth.

Hell no but you gotta let it sway

No miracle gonna happen when you feel that way

Bent up but you gotta let it sway

No firecracker in the dark gonna light your way

Blown out but you gotta let it sway

Throw my candle in the fire and I'm on my way

Head low but you gotta let it sway

C'mon now, c'mon c'mon

But, if you're an itunes girl, the free single this week actually reminds me of your story also... and it's FREE for download. "Double Trouble" by Jack and White. Go download it. IT'S FREE! lol

This is the longest review EVER. Sorry and your welcome. hehe

Excellent chapter, bb.

Take care ;)
Maplestyle chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
I've got a good one for Newton...Loser by Beck! *sings* "I'm a loser baby, so why don't you kill me"

Great chapter...but Edward made me want to cry at the end telling her it didn't change anything :(
LuvnmesumEdward chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
I wish they would hurry and get together!
gabs9 chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
Loved it.
DeepDarkBlue2 chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
You have 13,000 thousand songs on your IPOD? Holy Crap! I don't even know that many songs. Jeez! I went & downloaded Birds of Avalon like you said too. So don't cry and it was awesome. Now as for this weeks request I have to say when I listen to Theory Of A Deadman's Make Up Your Mind I kinda think of Bella cause that lady just can't make her mind of which guy she wants and she keeps changing her mind about if she wants Edward around or not. He's the one that's going to get whiplash. Awesome chapter.
ajs99 chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
love xxx
SmexyBexy chapter 12 . 8/26/2011
Words cannot describe how much I am loving this story :)
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