|Reviews for The Slowest Burn|
| DragonMama26 chapter 11 . 8/23/2011
Absolutely loving this story! Can't wait til Friday.
My guess is 4200 :)
| twifanmom chapter 8 . 8/23/2011
I wondered how Bella could have forgotten the prego test in the locker... Hmmm, so Edward will keep a secret from Royce for Bella... But she and Jasper got back together, for how long?
| twifanmom chapter 7 . 8/23/2011
Just Wow! I'm glad Bella and Jake have had a chance to talk! I think it has helped enlighten her and it as helped repair ome damage between them. I think she does need to get back to her true self.
| PurpleBoss chapter 11 . 8/23/2011
It has been so long since a story has totally owned me, I was starting to get so bored with the same old same old and then you come out of the blue with this amazing story and an even more amazing Edward!
I LOVE an Edward with attitude and issues and a history! An Asshole Edward to me is so fucking hot, some girlfriends and I were chatting about your Edward and we laughed saying in real life we would run a million miles an hour in the opposite direction if we were to come across a character such as this but in FF it's just fucking hot as hell.
I can't wait to find out why he feels such a connection to Bella, from even before they met. He is so intense about her and I really want to know why? When he hardly knows her!
Bella needs to pull her head out her ass and stop being such a whiney bitch all the time though and make up her god damn mind! I think she should talk to Charlie, he is understanding enough about Jake and I think he might have a few words of wisdom for his daughter.
I feel Alice has a bigger role to play in all this fuckery and I hope she is as good as Edward is making her out to be! I have a feeling Edward, Jasper and Bella are all going to need her before this story is finished.
And Rosalie, well she needs to tell Emmett she is preggo, he is so into her I think he would stand by her! She also needs to realise that Bella needs to make her own mistakes and just be there to pick up the pieces if it all goes into the toilet.
I just love everything about your story and I cannot wait until Edward and Bella finally get it together xxxxxxxxxxxxx
| pipelynn chapter 5 . 8/23/2011
gotta say, i love this edward. all of him with his vulnerability, everything...glad bella told rose.
| pipelynn chapter 4 . 8/23/2011
oh my, i love the mystery of the night at the party...love that cullen hides behind the hoodie for a few minutes...i can actually "feel" the attraction. so good.
| dragonfly336 chapter 5 . 8/23/2011
HOLY! I so should not have been reading that at work. That was probably one of the hottest "lemons" i have read. LOVE IT!
| pipelynn chapter 3 . 8/23/2011
love this chapter and how bella and rose are with each other, and how bella gives it right back to jess and lauren in the end!
| V3Ru chapter 11 . 8/23/2011
Hi! i started to read you story today and i must say i really like it! thank you! hope to read you soon!
| dragonfly336 chapter 4 . 8/23/2011
I can't tell you how much i am enjoying this so far! I don't even mind Bella's current relationship status..it's that good..lol!
| obsmama chapter 11 . 8/23/2011
I spent my morning with your characters because Crooked smile101 said to and my god I am so blown away. You really have created something so fun to read and emotional and god I love every character so far except Jessica kinda want to flap smack her ass.
| pipelynn chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
oh my! this jasper is so full of himself and cute at the same time and this edward makes my heart beat in overtime! whew, can't figure this rosalie out yet, but bella sure has her hands full! great start. saw this rec'd on the lemonade stand...
| dragonfly336 chapter 3 . 8/23/2011
LOVE! I am really loving your Bella!
| PAWsPeaches chapter 9 . 8/23/2011
I read this earlier but im just now getting a chance to review because i fucked off on fb and twitter all morning and now im behind on RL stuff (story of my life)
i beamed bright every time there were paragraphs of texting back and forth and when the facebook messages were being exchanged i was rolling.
you sure know how to keep us interested. im salivating over this fic like its a big juicy steak and i havent eaten in days. THANK YOU for giving us some refreshing good fic with NO bullshit cliches that we've all read before.
im supremely enjoying the polar opposites in this story... i wish i could fully express how must i love it.
the text b/t e/b - when e said that royce wasn't happy about it and not to judge him- my tummy did a somersault- sie me- i really would love for royce/rose to do the damn thing. Love them in this fic.
and there was SO much UST in that last textchange b/t e and b that i nearly glowed reading "B outside 1:30" HAHAHAHA!
| Lady-Suze chapter 11 . 8/23/2011
I found this story over at the lemonade stand, and I'm so glad I decided to read this! I'm really enjoying this although I'm not quite sure what to think about Edward and Bella. I'm not really liking those two right now ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter!