Reviews for The Slowest Burn
OPOSOJOJ chapter 11 . 8/24/2011
This is soooooooooo good! Have I mentioned how much I seriously love Possessiveward!
SusanQ chapter 7 . 8/23/2011
"I like the guy who was in the laundry room with me." I wipe my face with a lazy hand. "Not the guy he actually is." I'm glad she fears his anger.
SusanQ chapter 6 . 8/23/2011
I wish Rosalie were here, she'd know what to do. - I think this is my favorite part. :)
SusanQ chapter 5 . 8/23/2011
This is our meadow of confessions. - I loved this.

I think I would have gone home with him, too. ;)
Anisah Pinky chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
ho ly shit. talk about ust. but i kinda hat right now
twifanmom chapter 9 . 8/23/2011
Poor rose with the puking! So, Edward is gonna help Bella pick out a dress to wear to a dance with her boyfriend Jasper...let's see how well this goes...
J3NIN3 chapter 11 . 8/23/2011
Loved this chapter!
dreamiedreamer chapter 2 . 8/23/2011
Wow explosive! Bella was jealous and that made her did stupid things.
dreamiedreamer chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
I saw this recommended on the Lemon Stand, first charpter in and I'm already hooked. The sexual tension was more than simmering, it waas hot and intense.
DragonMama26 chapter 11 . 8/23/2011
Absolutely loving this story! Can't wait til Friday.

My guess is 4200 :)
twifanmom chapter 8 . 8/23/2011
I wondered how Bella could have forgotten the prego test in the locker... Hmmm, so Edward will keep a secret from Royce for Bella... But she and Jasper got back together, for how long?
twifanmom chapter 7 . 8/23/2011
Just Wow! I'm glad Bella and Jake have had a chance to talk! I think it has helped enlighten her and it as helped repair ome damage between them. I think she does need to get back to her true self.
PurpleBoss chapter 11 . 8/23/2011
It has been so long since a story has totally owned me, I was starting to get so bored with the same old same old and then you come out of the blue with this amazing story and an even more amazing Edward!

I LOVE an Edward with attitude and issues and a history! An Asshole Edward to me is so fucking hot, some girlfriends and I were chatting about your Edward and we laughed saying in real life we would run a million miles an hour in the opposite direction if we were to come across a character such as this but in FF it's just fucking hot as hell.

I can't wait to find out why he feels such a connection to Bella, from even before they met. He is so intense about her and I really want to know why? When he hardly knows her!

Bella needs to pull her head out her ass and stop being such a whiney bitch all the time though and make up her god damn mind! I think she should talk to Charlie, he is understanding enough about Jake and I think he might have a few words of wisdom for his daughter.

I feel Alice has a bigger role to play in all this fuckery and I hope she is as good as Edward is making her out to be! I have a feeling Edward, Jasper and Bella are all going to need her before this story is finished.

And Rosalie, well she needs to tell Emmett she is preggo, he is so into her I think he would stand by her! She also needs to realise that Bella needs to make her own mistakes and just be there to pick up the pieces if it all goes into the toilet.

I just love everything about your story and I cannot wait until Edward and Bella finally get it together xxxxxxxxxxxxx
pipelynn chapter 5 . 8/23/2011
gotta say, i love this edward. all of him with his vulnerability, everything...glad bella told rose.
pipelynn chapter 4 . 8/23/2011
oh my, i love the mystery of the night at the that cullen hides behind the hoodie for a few minutes...i can actually "feel" the attraction. so good.
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