Reviews for The Slowest Burn
TwilightJemS chapter 13 . 9/3/2011
Just Me Alone chapter 6 . 9/3/2011
Well Bella is right she is a shallow bitch...I get it, it is high school ,but he just bared his soul to her and she more or less kicked him in the balls.
Ina Twilight chapter 13 . 9/3/2011
He didn't kiss her...Damn! But still love this chapter. Good job. See ya next week!
Just Me Alone chapter 5 . 9/3/2011
So she likes him, and liking him would be social suicide. I get it, so she is going to pick Jasper even though she doesn't really like Jasper...

Cullen obviously likes her alot...I mean he kicked Jasper & Mike's ass b/c of her...

I feel bad for Bella, I mean if she goes with Cullen she will be shunned and if she stays with Jasper she will eventually be miserable...

And Alice Brandon, I am wondering how well Jasper knows her. I wonder if he is seeing her on the side, since Bella won't give it up just yet? I am thinking a yes...but those are just my thoughts I guess we will have to wait and see...

Love it!


SuffocatingUnderWordsOfSorrow chapter 12 . 9/3/2011
Love this story btw!

I knw u say u like indie music but pls give this song a listen. So Close by Calvin Harris and tell me what u think
SusanQ chapter 13 . 9/3/2011
Such a good chapter. Loved it!
Just Me Alone chapter 3 . 9/3/2011
Ok so Twi Momfan told me I must read this...and I am so glad I did. One of my favorite authors is Lola Pops, I love her style and her stories are quite original in the sense that she takes them...I know you have know become one of my favorites as well in the 3 chapters I have read.

Just the right amount of angst, mixed in with that make me want to hate Jasper for being so cocky, but then again he is a boy right? Edward I am trying to figure out, obviously he likes her, but doesn't go about it in the right sense. Rose, well she is four shades of fucked up in case no one else can see that...

Bella reminds me of a girl just skating along...she doesn't want to upset the apple cart so she keeps things to herself. The real her seems to come out with Edward...she feels with him, but he scares her so she doesn't quite know what to do...I like that she puts him in his place somewhat, but that is huge for her.

She likes him, but doesn't want too...It would be easier for her to just be with Jasper. She would be popular and he would be with her...The thing is that she wonders is why is he paying attention to her now? She has been there for 3 years and he just noticed? I think not...

I can't wait to get caught up with this, so so good!
fakeittobeit chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Seriously. This story is so intense. Never read anything like it. DON'T STOP WRITING.
MaryElizabeth23 chapter 6 . 9/3/2011
"He cuts the engine and slams a hand onto the wheel so hard that I jump in my seat and feel every hair on my body stand on end. My mouth has run dry and my body is in flight mode, but my head and my heart want a fight. Why am I so stupid?"

Love it
MaryElizabeth23 chapter 5 . 9/3/2011
Best chapter ever!

"It's a slow burn ..."
tjcutie chapter 12 . 9/3/2011
I just found this story and it is absolutely amazing! This is such a different take on E but I love it! Oh I so can't wait for next Friday!
36yearoldtwimom chapter 13 . 9/3/2011
That was the Hottest "non kiss" EVER! I LOVE that he loved her even before he knew her. Cant wait for Fridays...
bellybean chapter 13 . 9/3/2011
LuvnmesumEdward chapter 13 . 9/3/2011
Oh man...the title to this is absoultely perfect...I wish the burn would explode! Im ready for them to just ravage each other! Lol...loved it!
Domysticated chapter 13 . 9/3/2011
Aaaargh Edward!
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