|Reviews for The King's Gambit|
| icanhearthedrums chapter 6 . 2/4
OMG I LOVED THIS! absolutely amazing!
| thebeautifulbicky chapter 6 . 12/15/2013
Wow this is such a great story! It's... perfection.
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/19/2013
I actually hate the word perfection - it seems too much like 'Magneto' rather than Erik, if that makes sense. I like the story - you could expound on this but then again quality over quantity.
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/19/2013
I was going to make a comment that was along the lines of, "Charles is king and Erik protects the king" OMFG. I just died when I read this chapter, I looooooooooove it! I can't express how awesome this is in a more sedate manner because BAM, I love this and I can't think properly with the high.
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/19/2013
I do hope Charles gets rescued ASAP.
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/19/2013
Charles is my favorite character too and is that Stryker's son? Poor, poor Charles.
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
Hank was wonderful. Forgive but never forget.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Oh no, is lodged somewhere between my throat and heart. I really hate that Stryker because he just can't be human.
| Maple Tales chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
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| Drought chapter 6 . 11/19/2012
Woah, this is real good. I like your re-evaluation of the beach scene, and the result of damaged leg versus paralysis is a pretty tidy way to let Charles still be involved in the action. This story was equal parts sweet and badass and satisfyingly traumatic, so nice job. :)
| Dark Satirist chapter 6 . 4/1/2012
So... this is like... the billionth time I've reread this story... and every single time, it amazes me how beautifully you've captured the characters... and how amazingly intense this whole thing is. Even though I knew what was going to happen, I was still on the edge of my seat, biting my nails while reading this. Great job. :)
Thank you for writing,
| Professor Meshka chapter 6 . 11/7/2011
This story is brilliant. You really know how to get into a character's mind, a skill I admire in many fanfiction writers. I'm fascinated at how well you came up with this storyline, and how great your AU is. I'd love it if that's actually how the movie ended and then Erik and Charles began to save mutants around the world together. Overall I think you're a fab author and I applaud you on your imagination and creative skills used to bring this wish to life. Keep writing, I'll certainly look you up again to see what else you have to offer my curious mind. :)
| A maze thing chapter 6 . 10/27/2011
I really loved this story! I like the idea that it was Charles who's ideals changed, 'cause even though Charles is the 'good guy', Erik is still right. And how doesn't enjoy some nice whumpage and worried X-men. I'm very curious to read your backstory on this. This concept is wonderful, and I especially liked the adage of Remy and Wade. Wade was especially awesome in his annoyingly helpful way.
| NoelAnderson chapter 5 . 10/8/2011
i love jason in this! i hope you make a story where he is saved!
| NoelAnderson chapter 6 . 10/8/2011
you said you wouldn't continue this even though so many people have asked you, and i can't help but hope you will, or at least make a sequel and not just the prequel. this kind of x-men story is exactly the kind i've been looking for. i don't like slash, and most first class stories that center on charles are slash. not only that, but i absolutely LOVE how you added in Wade and Remy! no one else has done that yet! i prefer stories that center around the person i liked that most in the movie, book, show, etc, and right now my fave is charles so i've been reading as many first class stories as i can with him being the main character, so even if you don't continue this or make a sequel, i hope you make another first class fic! :)