Reviews for Clandestine
PermeliaSong chapter 3 . 7/23/2011
I hope you update, I wonder what's Roxanne and Victorie's relationship is going to end up like.

I'm very interested in seeing what happens. :)
Chioryo chapter 3 . 6/27/2011
Woah! Major twist there... holy poop! Amazing story as usual twin twin. Keep up the good work! :)
EssaTheTwerp chapter 3 . 6/24/2011
Loved it, hun! Neville is one of my favorites! :)
george's firework chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
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CLIFFHANGER!

Brilliance, sheer brilliance :O I am on the edge of my seat for the next chapter, I'm glad you entered!
george's firework chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Brilliant first chapter, I loved it!

Lots of emotion, and I love how you've managed to pain Roxie, even without much description of the character herself.

*skips off to read next chapter*
lady vonne chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Interesting relationship dynamic. I really like the way you conveyed the inner thought process of both Teddy and Roxanne. You made the status of their relationship very clear and I think that's what makes a good writer. Keep going with this, please! ;) I see so much from this starting chapter alone and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for this piece.

Anyways, if you have time, I'd love for you to check out some of the one-shots I've written on my profile. I've got only three so far, and they're M, but I'm working on more at the moment, as well. I'd love to hear your opinion! Thanks so much and, really, great job! -Vonne