|Reviews for Dispersion|
| teddyybear chapter 2 . 5/13/2013
You should definitly add a Sasuke AND a Sakura's POV xd (yes I'm greedy, very greedy !)
| teddyybear chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I DIDN'T ! SO GREAT ! Well, not really ,because it's so sad for the girl, but I didn't guess at all ...
| Chantrea Moonbeam chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
| Sam-A19 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
I thought Sakura was the one narrating the story but then at the end I was like "omg! So it's Naruto! (which I found super cute)
But theeen you said it was Karin but as I don't like that idea too much I'll keep thinking it was Naruto (Not because I hate Karin but because I love SN)
| pink-cherry-005 chapter 2 . 1/3/2012
I read it as if it was in Sakura's POV.
| pink-cherry-005 chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
This story was brilliant, sad, and emotional. It's similar to what I'm going through, where my friend, who I like, is as close to family as a cousin.
"I loved you because I wanted you to be happy, not so you could love me back."
Probably the most powerful sentence, as others were. I repeated it to myself and it rings true. I have my one-sided feelings bottled up, and I feel as if I love him but wish the best for him more than myself.
Terrific read. :)
| kakura sagami chapter 2 . 9/23/2011
I'm not ashamed to admit that I cried. I had suspected that it was Karin halfway through because it just couldn't be Sakura ( or at least I hope it wasn't). You have a way of writing that makes my chest very heavy but happy at the same time, you know? And thanks for portraying Karin as a human being. Though I'm a certified Sakura fan, I still think Karin is pretty decent. She and Sakura would have been great friends if the circumstances were different, like Ino and Sakura.
Yeah, I'm going to cry in my corner now.
| withloveagain chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
lol I thought sakura was the one telling the story haha xD
but i'm guessing it's karin? o.O
| the inversed butterfly chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
I had honestly believed that it was Sakura narrating and was purely shocked at how wrong I was. It was so sad and heartbreaking, tears pricked my eyes and 'till now they're still flowing. I sincerely feel sad for Karin. I do not hate her as much as I used to, but the thought of SasuKarin just makes my blood boil.
Anyways, this is amazing, and if you do, I will read Sakura's or Sasu-chan's POV.
| SasuSaku Forever and Ever chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
yay! thanks for the explanation! i actually dont hate karin that much anymore (she's anoying but still okay...) but i still hate ino P
| IPreferLemonPie chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
So I was right :] Your story was really good, I liked it a lot. I actually hated Karin at the beggining of Naruto Shippuden and the manga, but then I started liking her... kinda. And I think that Karin and Sakura could be good friends, especially because I see Karin and Suigetsu together more than SasuKarin. lol.
I'm glad your brother is good now :] My aunt is trying to recover too.
So I'll keep this story in hawk eye, I want to see the other two POVs :D
| JaebalAKTF chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
... Fine I'll admit it... I cried. There. You happy? You made me cry TT_TT I was so sad to think it was Sakura for most of that story then changes genius. Maybe if I read it with thinking it was a different person, I don't think I would've cried... haha hard sasusaku shipper? LOL
anyway well done!
| prettyinpink81 chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
Yes, please make a Sasuke POV version. I would love to read the story from his side. :)
| x.Sasu.Saku.x chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Dayyummm... You got me fooled! The whole time I thought it was from Sakura's Pov! And When Sasuke said "I don't love you" I felt my heart ache, cuz I thought it was to Sakura! And then when Karin(My guess is or Ino or an OC) said "Uchiha Sasuke and Haruno Sakura" I had to reread a couple times just to realize it wasn't Sakura's heart Sasuke was breaking. But I gotta say I pity the poor girl a bit, but at least she knows her best friend is in safe hands :)
| Serendipithy chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
One word: Karin. And the brother is Juugo. AMIRITE? 8D
The Schizophrenia part made me think of who could possibly be mental... and the only thing I could think of was Juugo. And personally, I think of Sasuke's Team Hebi as his third family, after his actual family and Team Seven.
I really loved this. Somehow, I actually had to blink tears out of my eyes at the end. :'D