Reviews for The Unexpecting Few
Lady Minuialwen chapter 2 . 6/27/2014
Great story so far I hope you update more soon
SilverPrime chapter 2 . 11/17/2011
I love it, I would like to know what happens next. Please continue.
Devil-O-Angel chapter 2 . 10/19/2011
is rad the 'rad' and 'carlos' from transformers armada?
Lunar Mist chapter 2 . 10/15/2011
This is really cute. Update soon, cuz I wanna see her reaction ;)
Lorna Roxen chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
I love this! Update soon! I can't wait! :)
Damsels chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
Just read this and I love it so far, you have to update leaving us with that sentence is just plain mean (joke) but seriously update soon!
bee-roxs98 chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
First part of the chapter LOVE the way you describe OP! :D

:D Can't wait to read more... hehe Optimus, always somehow getting a girl to get her breath caught in her throat, or to take her breath away. Loved it make more :D
Shizuka Taiyou chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
THe man is Optimus Prime holoform.

bee-roxs98 chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
0.0 I would feel really creeped out if i knew someone as watching me i can feel it when people are looking at me... I also wanted to add GREAT CHAPTER CAN'T WAIT TO SEE/READ MORE!
Maverick1997 chapter 1 . 6/13/2011

I loved this chapter! It has done a great set up for the rest of the story. I didn't pick up any spelling or grammar issues the first time I read it through, so you did well ! :D

As for the direction this could take, you could go any which way you wanted. It really depends on what you are comfortable writing and how long you want the story to go for.

Feel free to pm me if you need to bounce your ideas off of someone.