Reviews for Viper
Guest chapter 19 . 12/29/2012
Love the story, love the plot, love that it's complete! There was only one thing that caught my attention through both stories that bugged me a bit. You use way too many comma's. Example: "Severus smirked. "I thought you'd be worried, he'd turn her into a snake.""

"I thought you'd be worried that he'd turn her into a snake" flows better. I noticed this at the beginning and hoped it'd get better as you went but still- fantastic story. I really wish there were more Charlie/Harry stories out there! I love it. Thanks so much for writing it.
slyPotter3 chapter 19 . 12/27/2012
love this story it was amazing and cute and funny and a little sad at times. I loved loved it!
Draco mudiliar chapter 19 . 12/15/2012
ha happy is always nice to read a happy ending...
Draco mudiliar chapter 11 . 12/15/2012
ummm...I was expecting said in the summary but till now it was just a kiss...I wonder if ther are any?...I seriouly wanted to see some hots between the dragan rider and parselmouth
guest chapter 19 . 11/9/2012
this is a great story it is really sad for you to stop
Mashkai30 chapter 19 . 10/8/2012
Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!
JaylaCaine chapter 19 . 9/23/2012
Loved it.
bethanysb chapter 19 . 6/29/2012
Just finished both of these stories, loved them! _ thank you x
phillg chapter 5 . 6/24/2012
Fluff Fluff Fluff LOL
slashslut chapter 17 . 6/2/2012
humpf, ginny got off way too easy imo
dobby97 chapter 19 . 5/23/2012
i loved this story it was great but could you please post a chapter with all the kids names and who are their parents
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 19 . 4/3/2012
awww cute! love it! well...the beginning wasnt so cute with all the drama but by the end it was D
silbernewolfsfrau chapter 19 . 3/9/2012
aww i really liked this story... great ending :)
CL90 chapter 19 . 3/9/2012
Amazing story I loved reading them both!
917brat chapter 19 . 1/31/2012
this was a really brillint story and I hope that you make another CW/Hp story really soon because it was your stories, this one adn it perqual that got me hooked on this pairing.
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